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This is a great story. But when is another chapter coming. This is honestly one of the best storys ive read on here plotwise and i dont want this great story to end.

 

This is a great story. But when is another chapter coming. This is honestly one of the best storys ive read on here plotwise and i dont want this great story to end.

 

I just want to say that this story is fantastic! The characters are all really well written and they each have their own development. The sex scenes are top notch! The setting is detailed and interesting! This story is perfect and I wouldn't change a single thing. I can't wait to read more (Currently in chapter 8). Even though I love all the characters I would say Belinda is my favorite. Her scenes get me everytime! Thank you so much for writing this! Easy 10/10.

I was ad to this hadn't been updated in so long.
I can say without a doubt that it's my favorite story on this site.
I love MGE and there is definitly not enough lesbian mge content out there.
I hope you have the time to continue this someday.

I have to say that I am greatly impressed with the breadth of this series. It's very intriguing that you have taken so many directions with this whole shindig. Like other reviews have said, the beginning did seem a little quick - pairings and plot details - I feel that you have balanced it very nicely with a peppering of character development and background. If you have time to dedicate to this gem, please flesh out your supporting roles with gusto. As erotically and well as you write, which is quite well (you have a talent for keeping track of where everyone's fingers and parts, and well, tails are at all times and incorporate them nicely), I personally (thus take this whole thing with a grain of salt) think that each character has more story to tell. All of Janis' housemates look to have some complex pasts that have yet to come to light. Well, you did a great job with Seren, and Cynthia (not my favorite, but you have a definite purpose for her), but you did so well that I've been left wondering what else they have to offer. Even outside their respective bedrooms! I have to stop now, or I'll do a chapter by chapter analysis, and that's probably way too long for anyone to bear. Thanks so much for writing this story; I hope you find time to keep it flowing in the near future.
Thanks for reading.

I have to admit that although I didn't like ghost girl at first but she's starting to grow on me although I still wonder if she may be evil? I believe in monogamy when it comes to the master submissive relationship but this makes a very interesting story for a school of magic i'm not seeing much magic or plot outside of the kinky life of janis maybe that's what you were going for good story

Easily one of the (if not THE) best stories I've read on this site, I'm not sure I agree with having Janis suddenly be sub when she seemed to be setting up to be dom. But that's just my opinion on the matter, it's still written really well and reads just as good.

update update update. :)

The wait for the next chapter is killin me here love. Please update soon :( *pout*

I really hope it's not over lol this is seriously the best stuff i've read since ever, the syory is just....... wow and Chinatsu is just........ wow lol but, I don't mean to be rude, could you kill cynthia off? Please? Idk if I'm the only one but I just hate her lol I've definitely fallen in love with Chinatsu though, I really love her cause she's just WAY too loveable lol just please kill Cynthia or something I do not like her, other than that please keep writing, I love everything you write even though I haven't really even read that much of your stuff, what I have is amazing