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August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far. My biggest wish is that you editted it a little better with spelling and grammar. I had a hard time following in some places but i really enjoy the characters and the depth you bring to them. I really really wish i could see this story fleshed out a little more in the earlier chapters. More showing rather than telling. All in all i really like the story.
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story! Hope you'll update soon!
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Bravo! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just enjoy? I really love it. :)
I know I'm greedy but I hope you update soon!
I know I'm greedy but I hope you update soon!
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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
realmente sigo sosteniendo que lacey es una bruja maldita y su tia raquel la escucha sin saber bien que es la hija, pobre alli, tendra que elegir entre su amor incipiente o lo que le digan sus tios, muy bueno, espero uuy pronto nuevos capitulos, ana maria
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is soooo good.
I love it. Hope you update soon!
I love it. Hope you update soon!
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very sweet and has a lot of potential.
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, but please be careful of typos! "Could of" should be "could have" and "defiantly" is spelled "definitely".
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just read chapter one, and I really teared up. I like the way your story flows. Its got nice movement. I can't wait to read more. I think we've got a winner on our hands folks!!
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better. I can't wait to read more...