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September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was both scary, and really hilarious! That was a really entertaining chapter :)
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this is just fun. Very much enjoying the world, the tension of the story line, and the characters are very engaging as well. :-)
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! What happens to Ash and Shin? Will the mother really kill one of there children? Please update soon!
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo I'm excited to see how Shin reacts...the two pairs have a lot of potential for fun :P I'm curious about how Shin will develop with the ring too... :)
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is updated so quickly! I can't wait for Ash and Shin to get together. Looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work!!
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol. I love this story! :)
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wondreful story just read all 7 chappies and i cant wait for more
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever mentioned how much I love the females in your stories? No wilting flowers for your females, nuh-uh. XD I love it! Can't wait to read more, and glad to hear that you're getting better!
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a funny chapter! :D I really can't wait to see what happens next
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such an interesting story. I don't know how it's going to end so quickly. I like Shin though. The very unemotional approach of them genetics kinda freaks me out. I'm use to a very loving family. :) great job!