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by Aya

person Jazz
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! another update, I had to debate with myself whether to read it right away or save it for a treat at the end of the day...lol, guess I couldn't wait any longer :P So they're making friends in the forest, I wonder if they'll stay there...
person Jazz
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was both scary, and really hilarious! That was a really entertaining chapter :)
person szaugg
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this is just fun. Very much enjoying the world, the tension of the story line, and the characters are very engaging as well. :-)
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! What happens to Ash and Shin? Will the mother really kill one of there children? Please update soon!
person jazz
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo I'm excited to see how Shin reacts...the two pairs have a lot of potential for fun :P I'm curious about how Shin will develop with the ring too... :)
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is updated so quickly! I can't wait for Ash and Shin to get together. Looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work!!
person Midnightsscream
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol. I love this story! :)
person romanticfae
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wondreful story just read all 7 chappies and i cant wait for more
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever mentioned how much I love the females in your stories? No wilting flowers for your females, nuh-uh. XD I love it! Can't wait to read more, and glad to hear that you're getting better!
person Jazz
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a funny chapter! :D I really can't wait to see what happens next

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