rate_review Reviews

Hello. I was reading Companion and decided to read the previous stories too. I just finished Tweak. I think the universe is very well detailed and interesting and the plot is well thought out. The characters are very likable also. There were a couple of points in the dialog where I got a little confused, but it all straightened out by the end of the story. I look forward to reading the rest of the stories in this universe.

A lovely story, really,.. it is the third I read after reading Stray and Star Child.. I am not sure how to comply with the resolution you set at the end.. you are a gentle writer.. but I feel hungry.. I have not have my fill with these characters (which are amazing: consistent, well defined, you feel them right and their personalities don't overlap and you are sharing them the audience in so many ways..) .. I also feel that you are restraining yourself from building more in the set worlds or like the stories are cut in the middle and forced to end.. going to the wilderness in Tweak felt like the beginning of character growth and adventure... the individuals, the world was ready to burst not to wither.. if ever..

The story is actually more then lovely and the world is worth exploring even in other media forms..Thank you for your story!

omg i read one of your other stories and i i loved it so i read this one and it didnt connect until i had seen the name of the god its all one world and the power users they are the sidhe its like my god how did i not realise this there were so many connections the wilds the names of the tribes holy crap nugget i love it and i want more just my god brillant absolutly brillant

:) so I'm already so interested that I wanna keep reading. I suppose it's the pace you've set in the first chapter, kinda like the calm before a storm! I can't wait to keep going! :) I am now more positive than ever that I will be reading through every single story of yours...no matter how long it takes :D

Awww! That's such a sweet story!
I kind of wish there was an epilogue for the epilogue, but I love it as it is!
It's so well-rounded.... The end goes a little fast for me, around the part where Shin's brother's genetic material was stolen and the gov't came for Shin. But still... I loved it!

Woot! Now that was an awesome ending! Sad that the story had to end, but still it was SATISFYING!!!! OOOOOO I'm shivering with goose-bumps-adrenaline-rush-whatever-you-call-it-feeling. Each of your stories are like one water fall after another with nothing to keep me safe inside the craft I'm riding in. And each fall over the water's bend is like a water and food to my hungry stomach. AWESOME! Should you decide to publish, I'm in line for two copies of each of your books. 1 for reading, and the 2nd one for when the 1st one wears out. XD

I enjoyed reading Tweak although I struggled in a few sections because of the social complexity of the world you created (no trouble with the wilds though) - read the whole story in one go.

Thank you.

I really enjoyed reading this story, thank you very much for sharing it!

Now I'm very curious as to what will become of Shin and Ash.

If there'll ever be a sequel, then I'll be looking forward to it.

"Genetic and one called Wilds Born"
Will those be posted here or somewhere else?

And at the cross breeding thing... They aren't always infertile just more often that not and it's only females made from crossbreeding that will retain the ability to produce offspring in rare cases. Kinda like Ligers/Tigons. There are a few cases of female ones being bred though I can't remember where I read about it.

Also, thanks for the update. I check bad every day just in case you decide to post another chapter. Looks like I checked to early yesterday. *pouts*

They should just go back out to the wilds and fuck - so much simpler that way :p But of course things can never be that easy!

Um...I do have to say though. Donkeys and horses can and do have offspring - mules. (Sorry, I'm an equestrian nut, so I get nit-picky) Of course, since this is your world, mules don't necessarily have to exist there :p