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December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm lost. You posted chapters of this story once and in it Teddy took Dante to the 'camp' and they fucked and the story abruptly ebnded laving me unsatisfied and dissapointed.
Then it turns up as a rewrite and dissapears also.
Then it shows up like this.
Where are you going with this story?
I mean yeah add more plot, background,gore and facts kewl,kewl,kewl but man just pick up the slack a bit I'm getting tired of watchin ch 5 or ch 6 as 'the latest one'. Write, just write for old readers like me nothing new is going on in this story.
I'd like to see it..a puropuse and a good ending(yeah I want them to fuck but not as 'the end' but in the middle of the story.)
Then it turns up as a rewrite and dissapears also.
Then it shows up like this.
Where are you going with this story?
I mean yeah add more plot, background,gore and facts kewl,kewl,kewl but man just pick up the slack a bit I'm getting tired of watchin ch 5 or ch 6 as 'the latest one'. Write, just write for old readers like me nothing new is going on in this story.
I'd like to see it..a puropuse and a good ending(yeah I want them to fuck but not as 'the end' but in the middle of the story.)
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October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well this was a very VERY good chapter and worth the wait.
I didn't get the canibalism in time so it was like watching file X ahahaha.
I just hope you continue to write the plot and of course I don't know who'll pair up with who(oh, I'm curious about that too)
I didn't get the canibalism in time so it was like watching file X ahahaha.
I just hope you continue to write the plot and of course I don't know who'll pair up with who(oh, I'm curious about that too)
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October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start, looking forward to the character development...
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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start...and the new character Dante - wasn´t that somebody from hell?
Nice long chapters. Waiting for more!
Nice long chapters. Waiting for more!
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October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really like your story a lot, wish you write faster for I can't wait to see what happens! G
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
the first chapter scared me more
than a horror marathon at night with the lights off
pretty bleak future I just hope ours does not share this story's future
than a horror marathon at night with the lights off
pretty bleak future I just hope ours does not share this story's future
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the story, hope you keep going... its too bad that so-called survival demands such a vicious attitude. But trust of people in your story is in short supply... along with the availablity of oil and basic necessities. I hope the teller of tale, eventually find what he is seeking along with a once more trusting humanity. G
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very excited about this!!