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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well written! Chapter 1 doesn't reveal much but think you did well establishing the characters. Please continue!
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really interested in this story you have written! you've got me hooked :)
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, what a tyrant. I can't believe his own father whipped him just b/c he didn't take a prefect job in school. The poor kid just lost his mother for Christ's sakes!
Excellent story so far; I'm looking foward to reading more!
Excellent story so far; I'm looking foward to reading more!
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
interesting start so far. Sad about his mom, and I hate his father. Poor boy :/ can't wait to see how this progresses and what's in store for him at the start of the school year! Update whenever you find the time, will definitely read it when you do :)
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't even put into words how wonderful this is. The way you write is just captivating. Your charaters are interesting and the way you described everything was perfect. I'm very interested in this and I really can't wait to read more from you. Keep up the great work.