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July 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised to see so few reviews. This story it's really fantastic. I couldn't put it down and read it all straight through. Fantastic work and can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying your story. Can't wait for the next chapter
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April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a pleasant surprise! I was really happy to see you had continued this! As always, I enjoyed the reading immensely - I'll keep checking, so I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next update!
Excellent chapters, as per usual. I kind of wish that Cael was a bit more furious with Vega and her rather insensitive plotting, however tragically their encounter might have ended. After all, she messed with his future mate! I feel like he has quite a bit of pent-up anger with the way that Reyith has been manipulated all her life, and this might be considered the straw that breaks the camel's back. A brief sojourn into the darker side of his emotions might prove quite interesting, as he struggles to balance his love of his mate (and her obvious desire not to see him seek vengeance on her account) with his temper. Of course, I'm sure you have something great planned, and I don't want to spoil it by prodding too much.
Of course, I was glad to see our hero and heroine finally realize their feelings for each other, but I thought that perhaps that it was a little rushed? Understandable, of course, given their relief at seeing each other safe and sound, but the two of them have such a wonderful tension and so many emotional restraints that are holding them back. I'd like to see Reyith test her new mate a bit, if only for the amusement factor. I'm sure he'd respond in interesting ways.
No matter what you choose to do, I know I'll be more than satisfied. Just keep it up!
Excellent chapters, as per usual. I kind of wish that Cael was a bit more furious with Vega and her rather insensitive plotting, however tragically their encounter might have ended. After all, she messed with his future mate! I feel like he has quite a bit of pent-up anger with the way that Reyith has been manipulated all her life, and this might be considered the straw that breaks the camel's back. A brief sojourn into the darker side of his emotions might prove quite interesting, as he struggles to balance his love of his mate (and her obvious desire not to see him seek vengeance on her account) with his temper. Of course, I'm sure you have something great planned, and I don't want to spoil it by prodding too much.
Of course, I was glad to see our hero and heroine finally realize their feelings for each other, but I thought that perhaps that it was a little rushed? Understandable, of course, given their relief at seeing each other safe and sound, but the two of them have such a wonderful tension and so many emotional restraints that are holding them back. I'd like to see Reyith test her new mate a bit, if only for the amusement factor. I'm sure he'd respond in interesting ways.
No matter what you choose to do, I know I'll be more than satisfied. Just keep it up!