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May 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i liked this story. it is truly different from any of the stories ive ever read. wish i knew what the new rules were though.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this.
It was funny and interesting and REAL. You have a knack for writing really solid characters.
Which is, IMHO, one of the contributing factors to awesome porn.
Keep on keeping on!
It was funny and interesting and REAL. You have a knack for writing really solid characters.
Which is, IMHO, one of the contributing factors to awesome porn.
Keep on keeping on!
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Despite the most unenthusiastic sex ever ;) I actually liked their relationship even if half the time they seemed to be at opposite ends of the relationship spectrum, although maybe by the end there they had gotten themselves at least on the same page :) I mean it was obvious they did really like each other if they were willing to take turns bottoming when they had never done that with anyone before, who knows maybe it will work.^^
It was great to see an update from you, nice to know that you do still write when you have the time and I hope you keep on writing ^_^
It was great to see an update from you, nice to know that you do still write when you have the time and I hope you keep on writing ^_^
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Buck and Chuck need to get a good tube of slippery lube, not just spit! And as well as heap of sexual finese Along with lube. They go at each other like two new mechanics, fixing carbarator with a hammar and crowbar.
The only thing I found interesting between them was their honesty with each other, but for sexual technic the guys need to work on it! Have them try red wine instead of beer, to relax!
Do they make sex manuels for gay men, gee I hope so, these two need it! G
The only thing I found interesting between them was their honesty with each other, but for sexual technic the guys need to work on it! Have them try red wine instead of beer, to relax!
Do they make sex manuels for gay men, gee I hope so, these two need it! G
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sage.....you're back!!!!! It's so good to hear/read from you! hahah
Loved the story; glad they worked things out, Tho, at the beginning, it didn't seem like they were boyfriends at all. From what Buck was thinking before he called Chuck, he was thinking of him as one of the guys he was seeing, right?
Anyway, not important. What I don't understand, is why, oh, why, didn't they use something for lube??? That would have made the entire experience way more enjoyable, right? And I know you mentioned in Black Star Cross that guys don't hit the prostate each and every time, but it seemed like these guys didn't hit it at all! That would have made all the difference in the world, right?
Anyway, loved the story and I can't wait to read more from you!
Good luck with school (you're going for your masters, right? I'm trying to remember from the last story.....)
Loved the story; glad they worked things out, Tho, at the beginning, it didn't seem like they were boyfriends at all. From what Buck was thinking before he called Chuck, he was thinking of him as one of the guys he was seeing, right?
Anyway, not important. What I don't understand, is why, oh, why, didn't they use something for lube??? That would have made the entire experience way more enjoyable, right? And I know you mentioned in Black Star Cross that guys don't hit the prostate each and every time, but it seemed like these guys didn't hit it at all! That would have made all the difference in the world, right?
Anyway, loved the story and I can't wait to read more from you!
Good luck with school (you're going for your masters, right? I'm trying to remember from the last story.....)
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Usually, when I read about a couple that has "problems," it doesn't end in any shade of happy. I'm glad this is an exception. X3
Hooray for the return of your "real world Dudeness" to the internet! XD Buck and Chuck's lack of enthusiasm on the bottom, for example. It's such a nice change of pace to see a guy taking it that ISN'T in complete ecstasy within a few thrusts. XP
Yup, I think this is another Young Sage classic. ^w^ I wouldn't be surprised if people start asking for a sequel of some kind, if I were you, though. (Yes, I'm looking at you YS.) Me, I happy with things the way they are. But if you DO write up some kind of follow-up... I'm there. X3
Good work, dude. =3
Hooray for the return of your "real world Dudeness" to the internet! XD Buck and Chuck's lack of enthusiasm on the bottom, for example. It's such a nice change of pace to see a guy taking it that ISN'T in complete ecstasy within a few thrusts. XP
Yup, I think this is another Young Sage classic. ^w^ I wouldn't be surprised if people start asking for a sequel of some kind, if I were you, though. (Yes, I'm looking at you YS.) Me, I happy with things the way they are. But if you DO write up some kind of follow-up... I'm there. X3
Good work, dude. =3