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by simpson8457

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schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Please update soon!!! I don't read a whole lot on here, but this story really has me pulling for Gloria. Please!!!
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this poor girl! She must realize that Adam doesn't see her in that way. He sees her like a best friend, not a girlfriend. She needs to either be more aggressive with him, or find someone else. (As a boyfriend).

And trying to stop Clara's wedding after not seeing her for how long? It's insane!

Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is so funny! Glo-worm walking in on Frank and George going at it; how embarrassing is that?!

Too many funny parts in this chapter!

I liked the speech Frank and George gave Gloria; they're absolutely right. Adam doesn't see her as sexual; just as his best friend. But now, maybe, just maybe, he's rethinking everything....
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this premise, and the heroine feels very relatable. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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