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by simpson8457

schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is like being hooked on phonics XD I am addicted to this story. And that's saying a lot since I'm new on AFF and am apprehensive to half the stories I've stumbled upon. I wish they had a system where I could favorite your story. I'll have to keep checking back to see when it gets updated!

Your New Avid Reader,
~Cara
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I do hope you continue this story because I love it. I love Glo-worm. I want smack Adam for being so stupid and Frank and George are priceless. I just feel terrible for Gloria but now that she has faced her worst fear she can move forward. I can see a makeover implemented by her two best friends, F&G, and them going out to have some silly fun. I can also see her just doing things with her family like going to the lake (if their is one nearby) or a carnival or amusement park. Just having fun and being Gloria without just being Adam's best friend. Now is the time to really find out who she is and what she wants. I can really see her growing and Adam learning the hard way that his idea of Clara is a fantasy and he doesn't know the first thing about really loving someone.
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY CAN U PLEASE UPDATE SOON IT WOS JUS GETTIN SO GOOD!
schedule March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Dear! this chapter had me a weepy mess! I really want to kick Adam in the nuts! well written! please update soon!
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please please pleaseee update!! This story is so amazing, i check all the time to see if you've updated!
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man this was a sad chapter; I couldn't stop crying! I feel so bad for Glo-Worm. How is she gonna deal w/o having Adam as a best friend? That's the worst part; nevermind the fact that he's not interested in her "that way", now their friendship is ruined. That's the saddest part.

This was a great emotional chapter. I'm hoping Glo-Worm gets through it. Thank God she has Frank and George. And of course her family. :)
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so awesome!! YAY Calvin is back! You are so talented and I got all teary-eyed when Adam rejected our little Glo-Worm. She deserves someone who will make her feel beautiful, not fat and ugly. I hate Adam right now, I hope Clara dumps him and he comes running back to Gloria when she would have already moved on. I am not rulling out Adam, but he definetely deserves to grovel and beg for her forgiveness. I hope her and Calvin hook up in the meantime, love him, love you! You are an amazing writer, please update soon!
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! I love it!! I hope you update soon! I cant wait to see how Adam tries to crawl himself out of this one! Keep up the good work! I love your stories!
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so great! I hope Calvin comes back eventually because I really liked the chemistry between him and Gloria. I just can't believe he stole all their money hahah. Anyways please update this soon, I love this story, you are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more!
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yayayayay so happy u decided to continue.