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for The Fake Lover

by RavenAzathoia

person yuki
schedule May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU ONLY GOT 6 REVIEWS..unfair. I love this story. I think it doesn't get a lot of reviews because not a lot of ppl come over here, i think a lot of ppl go to the Original - Misc > -Slash - Male/Male. But this is a great story I can't wait to read more^.^ i'll comment everytime you put a chapter up^.^
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, welcome back! I'm glad you're back to updating; I really like this story!

Ohjiro really needs to focus on someone who is more attainable, just like he said. Someone like Ryo.

After all, he doesn't really want Gerrald (is that how it's spelled?) falling in love with "Aiko", and not him. And then what would happen if Gerrald tried to get into his pants, err, skirt. That wouldn't be too funny; Gerrald would wind up hating Ohjiro.

Anyway, good chapter; I look forward to more! :) Happy New Year!
person Tessa
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo! So good! please update soon! *jumps up and down in excitement*
person Sheireen
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I must say that I simply love it!
Ohjiro is soooo sweet and I love his family!They are so funny.

I hope you will continue soon, because I really want to read more of Ohjiro. ^^
person kylee123
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a fun story. Ojiro is going to be up to his neck in trouble with Gerrard pretty soon. At least his family is supportive. You guys make an awesome writing team. I can't wait to read more.
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I absolutely LOVE your new story!!! It's so comical; poor Oijiro (is that how it's spelled? ) How is it pronounced? He only feels free when he's dressed like a girl. haha

I thought for sure that the guy Daryl his dad's seeing, was also Gerrard's dad, only b/c Daryl was a famous singer. Is it just coincidence that Daryl and Gerrad's father are famous singers all in the same town?

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!