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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I really hoped R. would force J. into going to the police, but he's a stubborn little brat :P It'll probably take some intensive therapy before he feels enough self-worth to stop thinking he deserves to be abused. I also wonder what is going on with J's parents - I mean you'd think they would be concerned about him when he stopped keeping in touch right? I anxiously await more!
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is so intense! I loved reading it and can't believe more people haven't reviewed. I thought it was really interesting how Rupert seems to have the disposition to be the dom that Jesse wants, but he doesn't want to be that evil or hurt him. In that last chapter where Rupert makes demands of Jesse that felt like the forcefulness that Jesse really wants - someone to direct him rather than abuse. I hope you update soon!
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January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm so happy! R. is taking charge and I know he'll fix J. I can't wait for the next chapter. I sense more confrontation.
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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The poor baby! It's so sad that anyone would think they deserve that kind of evil in their life. I really hope he makes it to R. and they can start working things out because I think if he stays where he is any longer he'll die. Maybe that was an eye opener to N. and his girlfriend too - their friend's a psycho a-hole that needs to be in prison.
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December 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop reading once I started! So intense and so good! I really hope you update soon because I'm dying to know whether J. will be okay. R's rich and powerful isn't he? Couldn't he call the cops or something and save J?!
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! I'm so happy you updated, yet so sad, too; sometimes I just want to shake Jesse so he figures out what he's doing. I really like the dynamics of your characters, it gives a lot to think about when you read into it carefully. Again, poor Rupert, it must hurt a lot to believe that someone you love so much would go back to some guy who treats him like crap, rather than be with you, when you're willing to give them everything. I'm hooked on your soap-opera in the worst kind of way -- please update again soon!
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November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have never commented on any story before, ever, but I really like this! It definitely deserves more comments. And, I really like your writing style. I hope you update soon!! Poor Rupert, he deserves to be treated better... I can't wait to find out what happens...!
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am very intrigued by your story and cannot wait to read more. I did get a touch confused at who was who at the start but after reading it a second time, everything became clear. Please write more soon!
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was too funny! I just wrote a whole review, but AFF didn't take it. When I went back, I saw that it was b/c you just posted ch. 2.
So, I was confused about Daniel (abusive ex-lover from high school), Rupert, current lover, and Jesse. Love the name Jessie btw: my dog's name is Jessie, but she's a girl. But love it more for a boy!
Ok, gonna read ch. 2 now.
So, I was confused about Daniel (abusive ex-lover from high school), Rupert, current lover, and Jesse. Love the name Jessie btw: my dog's name is Jessie, but she's a girl. But love it more for a boy!
Ok, gonna read ch. 2 now.
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, Jesse had an abnormal fixation with, what's it called, asphxiation? (however it's spelled) And Daniel was ok, except for when they were having sex. Or when he was raping Jesse?
Good story, still a wee bit confused. Altho I think Jesse better stop thinking of Daniel when he's having sex with Rupert!
Good story, still a wee bit confused. Altho I think Jesse better stop thinking of Daniel when he's having sex with Rupert!