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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More.
Please, more. That was absolutely wonderful. I loved the characters and I thought you did a really good job at elaborating on what was going on and the things Riley was thinking and feeling.
I read the first story and I loved it too. I'd like to know more about these two and their relationship. Also, I think your writing is great. You have my full attention and you make me want to read more from you, your story flows well and it doesn't lose me and you really painted a picture with your words, I could see exactly what was happening. Keep up the great work! And I hope you keep writing. :)
Please, more. That was absolutely wonderful. I loved the characters and I thought you did a really good job at elaborating on what was going on and the things Riley was thinking and feeling.
I read the first story and I loved it too. I'd like to know more about these two and their relationship. Also, I think your writing is great. You have my full attention and you make me want to read more from you, your story flows well and it doesn't lose me and you really painted a picture with your words, I could see exactly what was happening. Keep up the great work! And I hope you keep writing. :)