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for Loving Mia

by WhisperingMoon

schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I guess it must be kale's turn now.
person anomy
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovee the new updatee.. WOW Def can't waiiit for the next chapter and to see what happens when they stay all stay together!!!! :] Can't wait for it to heat up somemore. hurry back!!!
person Mendoza
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know how to describe the feelings I get when I read your story. I like it so much I try every day to make sure you haven't updated. This story keeps me occupied on my very long and boring days in the Navy. I hope you continue writing and I hope this story has a good ending, no major twists please! :D
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poe favor como reacciona con estos dos hombres, como los ama y ella es virgen, espero muy pronta actualizacion, ana maria
person Nuki
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo, not a cliffhanger!!! >_<
I can't wait to read what happens this night. Pls don't let us wait. :(
person Jennifer
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and it is very intriging but the chapters just aren't long enough.
person DukeCain
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this Story .... <3
person Este78
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Now, I'm concern about Kale reaction too,but I know you'll let us know in the next chapter very soon... Hint;)

person AnaStas
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch8, my thoughts: So this Eric fellow... he'll be back yes? I don't like him.
Sometimes you call Kale Kane :) Isn't Kane another one of your characters?
Aidan is my favorite!!!
She should do both at once at first, it's only fair.
You know... this whole "you'll never get rid of us" stuff... hot but scary. I like it :
~Stas
person Este 78
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let the loving begins;)