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que hermoso capitulo, el mes de mia es algo que no sabian y la intespetuosa llegada de la madre que los descoloca, espero que muiy pronto actualicas, ana maria

LOL. Mia's mother must have a little bit of ESP to show up like that. I don't know what Aidan and Kale are going to do. I get the feeling that they might not be ready to expose their fragile new relationship to family scrutiny. That could put way too much pressure on poor Mia. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you, these chapters are like an early christmas present. :)

que puedo decir de este capitulo solo "alucinante", la fantasia de toda mujer hacer el amor con dos hombre hermosos como aidan y kale, mia debe estar contentisima, espero que no se embarace tan pronto, porque el hijo va a ser de los tres de ellos, por favor que sea muy pronto otros capitulos, estpy muy ansiosa por leer, ana maria

oh Mia is totally going to end up preggo... & possibly with twins from both of ??!!! that can definitely happen... hhhmmm loved the update!!!

Nice! Keep writing

Hi Katherine. Since you made some changes to the story, maybe you could put up a better explanation of everything that has been changed. I am going to start reading from Chapter 8 onwards but I wonder if anything has been changed from further back. An explanation would be really helpful to us readers.

you've rewritten some, right? i like it much better now. and i liked that instead of worrying so much about her innocence they actually had sex, good for them. but you've overdone it a little with her virginity part. it sounds like she's giving birth, not having sex, and if it hurt so much, how likely is it that she would enjoy it twice in a row? well no matter i like it and i hope you will continue for a while yet.

Wow. I love the new chapters. So much that I did a little dance. I think it is great that they were all together. Aidan could have gotten a blowjob while Mia and Kale were together. Mia will have to learn how to make love to two men at the same time. That should be lots of fun to read. I enjoyed getting to reread so many chapters at once. I always support and encourage writers to change the story if it doesn't work for them. It usually makes things better. I am kind of glad they are not using condoms. I am hoping they will start filling the house with cute Mia-Aiden-Kale babies.

In reference to the last line of Chapter: Loving Mia Pt. 2, I know right!!! That's what makes it exciting!