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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Guh, guh, guh!!! * speechless; can only make base animal sounds *
That was probably one of the best short humil fics I've ever read; you're really good at these PUNCH stories--short and BLAM to the mind and emotions of this reader!
I love the oscillation of humiliation, rough and dirty talk and then the completely believably love and sweetness. It was perfectly bang-on. Very erotic, indeed. And humorous! One section, within only a few sentences had me extremely INTO the moment of roughness *dies a little happy death* and then laughing out loud--and it went together perfectly! Great balance in your stories!
It was this section:
Abruptly Nick gripped a handful of his hair and shoved his face roughly down against the desk. "Say it." Heat shot to the pit of his stomach. "I'm a...a girly little slut," Aaron gasped, his whole body shuddering with shame as he said it . . . "Yes," Aaron groaned readily. His face was an inch away from an essay about electroshock therapy. He was going to hell.
That was probably one of the best short humil fics I've ever read; you're really good at these PUNCH stories--short and BLAM to the mind and emotions of this reader!
I love the oscillation of humiliation, rough and dirty talk and then the completely believably love and sweetness. It was perfectly bang-on. Very erotic, indeed. And humorous! One section, within only a few sentences had me extremely INTO the moment of roughness *dies a little happy death* and then laughing out loud--and it went together perfectly! Great balance in your stories!
It was this section:
Abruptly Nick gripped a handful of his hair and shoved his face roughly down against the desk. "Say it." Heat shot to the pit of his stomach. "I'm a...a girly little slut," Aaron gasped, his whole body shuddering with shame as he said it . . . "Yes," Aaron groaned readily. His face was an inch away from an essay about electroshock therapy. He was going to hell.
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great! I really like reading Aaron, an interesting guy. I guess lots of things happened between Sissy and this, huh? Write them down! I'll read!
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay more Aaron! This is not what I was expecting at all, but it was a good kind of unexpected. Really good =P I'd love to read more about Nick and Aaron, how they met and what not. Hope to see anther story from you soon!