rate_review Reviews

I like this. It's like two lovers who've been together forever and are just really very comfortable with each other. Even though this is about Claire's and ell's step into that type of relationship, they seem just very in tune with each other.

Me Like.

XD That sex scene was not awkward! I'll admit it was a bit wordy and didn't have as much emotion and passion that it could have had, but it was in character, I think. Ellen has the tendency to think a lot so her thoughts were very HER during that part. The jumping to different lapses of time was kind of a bother, but I understand that you had to. I don't get why Claire took so long to just do it with Ellen! She had many good opportunities! "Screw Greg!" she could have said. "I'll show you a good time, baaaaaybaaaaay!" ;)

So, does round two mean you're making another chapter?! ^__^ I'd like to see if they continue this relationship they have into something bigger. :)