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YES PLEASE MORE NOW!! they are so sweet, but so cute!

That close to some hot mansex, and then you take it away? What is wrong with you?! Just for that, I'm going to kill Toreth off.

Gah! I hate trying to type on an I-touch. At least this thing auto-corrects me. I had just gotten off the computer for the night, and had decided to check the latest updates since I had just finishing updating the 4th chapter of sacrificed. I think you had left me a review for the 1st chapter of that one. Of course I see an update from a story I wanted to review though. So here I am, typing slowly on a stupid I-touch, not even logged in, just so I can give a review. (even though you cut it off right as it was getting good) I kind of made an odd squeak when i realized that the chapter was ending. I definitely didn't want it to. I can only ask nicely for you to update soon. I'm dying to read what happens next. Will he actually make love to him, or will something get in the way? Please update soon?

It was very sugary, but I like to see them interacting and to learn about things they have in common - that their relationship isn't just based on physical attraction. And because of that at this point I'm wondering what is going to happen when they leave this sort of fantasy sort of Alice in Wonderland world they are in in New York. I'm not going to complain about any sex that might go on in the remaining chapters but in all honesty I could just read their banter all day.

Sweet is good!!! I've only been able to find Angst fics for a while so it's nice to take a break.

i really really like this story of yours. I accidentally clicked it the other day and just read the whole thing within two days. So yes, i think i'm going to get some cavities soon.
I fall in love with your James. He's sweet, socially clumsy, shy and just got enough quirkiness so i can't categorized him into any stereotypes. As this is written from James' point of view, i don't get to see the inner working of Turkish so much. Would it be too much to ask to have a chapter or just a side fic showing his perspective on things? The image i get from James about him is that he's a bubbly, outgoing person with artsy edge to him. He's the sunshine. But i bet for him to be good enough photographer, he's got to have certain depth and understanding of humanity. And i would love to see James from his eyes. If me writing reviews going to get that next chapter out quicker, i shall review as often as possible. It's not about the sex (although you would never hear me complain about that), but i am tingling with anticipation, what else are you going to throw their way before they get the happily-ever-after feeling. That's for now. Love, K.

*gets done reading the chapter blinks and yells nooooo* A cliffhanger so evil. Yay James didn't freak out as much as I though he would. This story is really sweet. Turkish and James are so right for each other. They are equally awkward in certain situations. James is learning that Turkish doesn't always know what to do either. Now I will beg for an update. Please please please.

It's just too damn cute ^___^
I love it.

Ahh, to be young and in...like in NYC. Turkish a nerd on the inside, I can believe that. James' silent, mini-freaks were sweet. If you think I'll beg for an update, giving me something I want...you're right. PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY SOON WITH A SWEET AND SEXY LOVE SCENE, BY FRIDAY EVENING! :)

Please don't let James freak out about being called boyfriend.