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by Jblueblue

schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
James is going to see Turkish's family!! Yes! Will you be writing a Turkish point of view? One more chapter? Aaawww. =( I don't want James and Turkish's story to end. Will James ever bring Turkish to Minnesota to meet his family? That would be interesting.
person Toni
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad that it's almost over.
I'm gonna miss James and Turkish :)
person kr4nky
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Would it be possible to see the last two scenes from Turk's point of view? Please? Pretty please? Puppy eyes please?
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful like always. A bit sad to see it end but glad that I won't be left with an indefinite to be continued.
You know I'd love to see a jealous James or Tukish, preferible James. I just think he still feroz some unsecurities that would be nice to explore.
Turkish is really godo For him and it's awesome how their relTiionship has developed. You did an incredible job at describing it.
One little off topic question though, are we getting swallowed by a whale back or do we have to wait for the comic?
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*OMG* That was so beautiful! Their lovemaking was breathtaking! I'm so glad that James finally got over his fears..."Turkish" is the best thing that has ever happened to him. Only 1 more chapter?? Oh no! I love these guys!
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo! Lots of hot lovin'! Those two are adorable together. My only complaint(besides the fact that its almost over, sob) is one paragraph toward the end that has at least four grammatical errors in it, including 'they're' instead of 'their'. But otherwise, I love it to pieces. Thanks for writing it, you've made this author very happy.
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAYY!!! An epic climax :)

person Southwind
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally! James and Turkish together, beautiful. What do you mean one more chapter? The sentence confused me. Surely you have about four more chapters to get it all out. If not, PLEASE make it so.

If begging won't get me more chapters, then a sweet I-love-you scene would be nice.


You sure you want to end it with one more chapter? Don't rush yourself! ;)
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be very upset after this story ends. Maybe I can squeeze a sequel outta you. Hmm.

Even if there isn't a sequel you've gained an avid reader. )': Love you very much.

MMP
person Faletta
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay it was so sweet. My last hope is for this not to end :)