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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story has made my LIFE!!! I'm going to bookmark it so I'll have something that will, without fail, cheer me up. You are the only author I follow who has mastered the sweet and cute without overloading the corny. Everything about Art Criticism is so believable. You have made me believe in happy endings :)
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What am I going to do now that Art Criticism is over? Loved the bonus track, and really hope that you might peek into James and Yusef's life now and then and see what they're up to. Thanks for a lovely, and well-written story. It's rare to have both at the same time.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that last bit slayed me. Loved getting yusi's perspective. I'd love a straight version of him knocking on my door.
Love the bit about Muslim Americans being misrepresented in the media, but I'd like to extend that to most Muslims, not just Muslim Americans.
I read a lot of crap about Muslims its frustrating; Sometimes I feel like screaming I'm gg, and I'm not a terrorist, sorry if that screws your statistics.
Anyway, gettin a bit deep here lol, loved the chapter, the second half definately made it for me.
Love the bit about Muslim Americans being misrepresented in the media, but I'd like to extend that to most Muslims, not just Muslim Americans.
I read a lot of crap about Muslims its frustrating; Sometimes I feel like screaming I'm gg, and I'm not a terrorist, sorry if that screws your statistics.
Anyway, gettin a bit deep here lol, loved the chapter, the second half definately made it for me.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, not the extra chapters I/we wanted, but the I.L.Y was sweet. The nicknames were also cute.
Thank you for the story. It has been interesting, intelligent,and well written. I've had to google things mentioned in your story. Being a girl in a small Southern town, some of the thing you referenced were totally foreign to me. But that's good writing for ya! Looking forward to reading more from you.
Thank you for the story. It has been interesting, intelligent,and well written. I've had to google things mentioned in your story. Being a girl in a small Southern town, some of the thing you referenced were totally foreign to me. But that's good writing for ya! Looking forward to reading more from you.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww <3<3 they make such a cute couple. That chapter gave me warm fuzzies all over :D
Really loved reading this story, and now, will continue to stalk your other fics.
Really loved reading this story, and now, will continue to stalk your other fics.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
they're so cute together
only one more chapter? i want more :(, youve made me a james addict
only one more chapter? i want more :(, youve made me a james addict
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shit! Where have I been?? I missed not one but TWO of your hella awesome chapters!!! But I only had time to catch up on one. The next one I can't read until tomorrow.
Anyway, I'm so glad James is getting along with all of Turkish's friends. I'm also thrilled that he's working through his "freaking out" over everything. He handled the boyfriend oomment(s) really well and now suggesting condoms! I'm so proud of him!!! lol
Ok, tomorrow I read the next chapter.....
Anyway, I'm so glad James is getting along with all of Turkish's friends. I'm also thrilled that he's working through his "freaking out" over everything. He handled the boyfriend oomment(s) really well and now suggesting condoms! I'm so proud of him!!! lol
Ok, tomorrow I read the next chapter.....
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad. I really am quite sad that this is the end. But my gosh, I love it. :) I love James and Yusef so much :) I wish I could hug them. A lot. And take pictures like a crazed 'fag hag fangirl' (my friends like that term... damn them)
It's cute, well written and engaging. More importantly however, it's realistic and relatable and just a pleasure to read :)
Well now this is finished, I can;t wait for you to update your other stories. Like the 'gangster' is one. I forget the name, but you gotta love mafia style stories :)
It's cute, well written and engaging. More importantly however, it's realistic and relatable and just a pleasure to read :)
Well now this is finished, I can;t wait for you to update your other stories. Like the 'gangster' is one. I forget the name, but you gotta love mafia style stories :)
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(22) I don't think it came as much of a surprise that they were amazing together, also liked how they kept talking through everything, so often in stories as soon as the smut starts the dialogue stops. Also glad everything went well for James and it seems like now he's going to want to make up for wasted time, which isn't a bad thing and I'm sure Yusef won't complain ;)
I can't believe there's only one chapter left, there's so much to tell plus I admit that I don't want to say goodbye to these guys :) I do look forward to the next chapter though and how you're going to wrap everything up :)
I can't believe there's only one chapter left, there's so much to tell plus I admit that I don't want to say goodbye to these guys :) I do look forward to the next chapter though and how you're going to wrap everything up :)
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of bouncing up and down on my chair right now. After reading that chapter, I just wanted to hug them both. So cute! I am also very happy to say that I'm not reviewing on that stupid I-touch, hence me being logged in as I review. I really can't wait to read the next chapter. I really want to see those two be happy with each other. Please update soon!