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Wow! I just came across this jewel today and after reading the four chapters you have available here I had to read them all over again just because I was so excited about the quality and the freshness of your work. It really stands out. So far, loving everything, especially Turkish. I'm glad he's not a real person I have to meet every day because I find myself laughing at everything that comes out of his mouth (and that isn't very polite). Such a good job you have done with this character! But, I'm looking forward to seeing the other side of him, the one that can for whole sentences and whatever... :-) I noticed there was some talk about doing a Turkish POV. I have to say I'm a bit apprehensive about that as I think it might spoil the plot a bit if it comes too early (or at all). I mean, I have never read Austen's Pride and Prejudice (gasp!), but I'm pretty sure that part of Mr. Darcy's charm comes from the fact that you don't really know what he thinks about Elizabeth in the beginning. I could be really, horribly wrong though. (Why I'm comparing Turkish with Darcy is beyond me since they are not similar at all, but it's your fault for mentioning Mr. Darcy somewhere... I guess.) Besides, I like the James POVs a lot. He's such a funny guy. So, what I am trying to say is that while I am also excited to get inside Turkish's mind and find out what he thinks about everything, it's even more exciting not to know. Sort of sweet torture, if that doesn't sound too ridiculous. I mean, in real life you can't really know what other people think, unless they tell you (and it might not be very accurate) and uncertainty is part of every relationship. Anyway, I'm really confusing myself too, but yes, I just wanted to say: good work! :-)

He could always hook up with a stump- ha ha! Now I feel just a little bit sorry for Turkish- I think he's trying too hard :( Maybe now he'll be a bit more himself and less annoying :)

hehehe thanks! I was so excited to see a new chapter!! Ahhh I cant wait for mroe! I really want to see what James is going to do know!

Oh I can't believe he did that. Q_Q that made my tummy flutter and i feel like a jerk. Poor turkish he has it bad for our cute little James.

and I'm a painter mostly acrylics and water colours (oils scare me).

and thank you for popping the chapters out so soon they are making my day.

I love james right now lol. As a struggling artist, working at an art store i can soo feel for james. Down with the jerks.
lol hurt turkish is cute though

thank for the update

This story is hella awesome. But, besides that, I love the cliff hanger on the 4th chapter, because you left it off at such a dramatic place, and I need to know what happens next >.< I really feel bad for James, though, because he probably just screwed up the gallery viewing, and his job is really stressful. I hope everything works out! (of course, though, it's always a little more interesting when some things go wrong)

I also love the story-line, because there aren't many stories about people who manage art viewings o.o Very interesting concept to base your story on.

I love James and his personality. This story is going pretty well, can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work :)

Wow. Well, it's no SFC Colony story, but this has captured my attention already. Turkish seems like an ass and a ditz, but I do love seeing such put in their place! XD I'm eager to see this story continued.

I can't wait to see how this works, lol turkish kinda seems like an idiot but i really hope is just for show.
i would love to read something from his point of view.

thankx for the update

(3) I love a great girl and Kitty is definitely that, it's too bad James is gay... I wonder if Peter is straight ;)
And Turkish being his adorably clueless self^^ I loved your explanation of his name simply because I don't find it hard at all to imagine him keeping a nickname based on mistaken identity, actually if there's a lot more to him than we first think it might even be appropriate. Fun chapter maybe James should be nice to Turkish at least for a bit so that he can get to see an actual Fields up-close and personal, can't wait for an update ^_^