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person Laie
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I am sooooo addicted to this fic!! I love it!!
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Here here here ha ha I liked it! ;D
I just knew it was gonna be a Mia Fields photo. And that + 'the blush' prooves Turkish fancies James! Can't wait to see what happens at the opening!!! And James is so cute with this cleaning his glasses all the time. Great chapter, but what's with those cliffhangers! ;)
Love you :*
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
>:(

You know, when I got on AFF tonight, I had no intention of actually reading anything. Just scoping. But then I check your story, and I catch a few lines and then I end up reading the rest of the story. Grr, you, grr.

You can make it up to me, though, by posting more chapters ;)

schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I would've yelled at Turkish too? lol. I really like this story, it's really creative and makes me laugh a little too. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon PLEASE!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for enjoying James chewing Turkish out so much. awesome :D
Can't wait to see what Turkish is gonna do now that he knows his crush thinks he's a joke. OOoooo such a good story
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. Ilovethisstoryilovethisstoryilovethisstory!!! Thanks for sharing it. It's just so smart and funny and intriguing. AND its set in Cali, which I love. I adore James and his insecurities and how they clash with Turkish and his insecurities. Great writing. I can't wait for more.
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nnnn T-T I love it so much!! More please??
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Type faster, type faster! Argh!!!
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really wanna see Turkish's side of what's going on!!! This chapter's really good!
person crysra
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good for James!!!!!!