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Your story is hella awesome, like, it just has these moments of, like, clarity. But seriously, I love your character development. The way James's feelings are changing and Turkish's actions towards James are changing shows you have put some thought into the words you are writing before you write and post them. For that, I am sincerely grateful. Thank you for this wonderful story.

i'm not sure if i should forgive you or not, with where you left it off... because of where it could possibly lead...

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Do you update daily?

Glad that james is not giving in too easily. If i liked turkish more than james, then i would probably mad about it, but since i like james better, it all works out!! Love the new chapter,Turkish's attitude has improved by a mile! Now he might actually have a chance with James :)
He was probably very happy to see James blush. James being reluctant to return the gift was so cute!

I really enjoyed this chapter. James doesn't even know what has hit him; the way you've written Turkish is so refreshing, he's irresitible (though I'm sure James will find a way). Turkish's excitement during his Frank convo with James almost made me want to go out and learn more myself. Such a great chapter! Sorry about all the gushing btw, I just love good character development.

I really, really love this story. I'm in art school at the moment, so a lot of the little things are ringing so very true. I love the dynamics between these two.

Wow. Go Turkish! Go hit on James! It confuses him!! lol Poor James,such a lightweight like one of my friends.

haha thanks I really did enoy this chapter;))

(6) Actually I'm beginning to think it's actually James who it's a strain to talk to, this was not one of his finer evenings. This whole resisting talking to Turkish thing he's got going on is just ridiculous, I want to shake him and tell him to stop over thinking things (that might be hard for James i know) be gracious and just say thank-you, not everything has an ulterior motive. (even if Turkish does want in his pants ;) I like how we're gradually seeing more of Turkish as he really is and not just how James sees him, which is slightly biased I would think. And James also needs to be careful, he starts learning all these different things about Turkish and he may start to like the guy :)

So next chapter Turkish has to walk James to his apartment to make sure he gets there in one piece because he's been drinking, at least that's what I assume Turkish's excuse will be ;) Good think you're a fast updater, we won't have to wait long to find out :)

T-T I hate you for stopping!!! Gah! T-T cliff-hanger!!

yay!!! go turkish go!!!! grab him while hes a little drunk and rock James world!!!


woo!!!!!!!!