rate_review Reviews

Oh my God. Those two chapters where just the best ever. It's all spot on! The interaction between them is multilayered and very interesting. I'm excited about the potential of their relationship, how it can make them better. And I love it how Turkish just knows how to deal with James's freak outs. After all they may be perfect for each other and they are funny to watch! Love it!!! ;D :*

thank you for the update LOVED it.
Poor james he is his own worse enemy. Lol the throw up thing was cute especially how Turkish was all sweet about it and not like "Gross Dude"

Thank for updating so fast and i always look forward to ur chapters.

Oh wow, this was my favorite chapter of this story. I liked this long conversation. And I liked slightly drunk James. And Turkish was so gentle. It was amazing. Whole chapter full James-Turkish interaction. Can't wait for the next.

yay a kiss!!!!!!!! need more of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im so hungry and now all i can think of is mac and cheese... and i dont have any :(

I love this story! I do a happy dance every time I see a new chapter.
You have such a wonderful way of dealing with the varied complexities of the human psyche. Like real people, your characters do weird things, make poor decisions and act stupid...they are not one dimensionally good or bad but are flawed and emotionally messy... *grin* and Turkish and James are sooooo "messy"... can't wait to see what happens next.

Great sense of humor through the whole story, but Reception Part 2 is just out and out funny. I'm really enjoying this.

Dude! This story is so hella awesome!!!! :)

James seems a tad bit dysfunctional. It's like when anyone gets close to him, he pushes them away. And this whole time Turkish was being all flustered around James, and James was totally oblivious. Kitty was the one who noticed it. But now that James is actually spending some time with Turkish and realizing he's not the asshole he used to be, he's the one who's all flustered. Maybe Turkish was acting like such an ass was b/c he really liked James but didn't know how to act in front of him. Maybe he just started acting obnoxious to hide his feelings.

But James, he's a whole different banana! I think anyone would need a handbook to try to figure him out. He needs to just chill and let his guard down. Why is he so pent-up?

Hopefully he'll let Turkish get close enough to figure him out. But I think it'll take a loonnnggg time!

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one! Oh, and at least Turkish was a gentleman and didn't bring/carry James to his bed! lol

Uhhh... *drool* Wonderful chapter! Sexy and cute all at once! "Whoa, heavy, dude" is now one of my favorite lines ever.

-cracks up and falls off chair- Oh, James. He's a bit uptight and kind of a spaz. I like how Turkish is handling James and his mood swings.

Not many writers can create characters quite as dynamic as your. I love turkish and james they are so believable. I love that they have this behavioral flaws it just makes them so real to me. like I can believe that they actually exist sorry im rambling (slightly tipsy atm) but i wanted to review and say thank you.

Soo thank you and I LOVE you