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(7) Good lord James calm down take a breath, could you possibly make this any harder, just stop running. I do think Turkish is on to him though, he seems to realize that James is more bark than bite and that teasing him actually makes for a bit of fun. Also I like that he's willing to call James on his shit, maybe it wouldn't be such a bad thing to have someone who won't let him wallow or completely freak out over things. As for the two of them the banter is rather funny and the heat that is slowly building between them is becoming quite sexy, plus I kind of think James deserves to get the good looking guy for once :) I was hoping we would get to see what was in Turkish's studio I would love to see James' reaction to the stuff that Turkish does that's not necessarily for his shows, might even surprise James.

It's midnight and I have a craving for mac & cheese, to make some or not I guess I'll have to flip a coin ;)
Another great chapter, you know all of them are actually and I always find myself rereading them a couple of times each, looking forward to what happens next :)

Ooh, yes, I know awkwardness is many people's cup of tea, the hottest and with the best flavour. I mea, sex scenes are all good and stuff, but they can get old (what am I saying?!). I don't think awkwardness has ever let me down. It's the builup. But enough about that! The 'silently judging' thing cracked me up. I have to say, I idetify with James a lot, which is why I mostly comment on Turkish's character. It's easier when there's more distance to recognise and discuss certain characteristics, especially what I like about the character. If I were to take a closer look at James I'm almost 100 percent sure I'd get a bit depressed. He's just... I don't know, I do like him. I just wish he'd be less stubborn and not so hard on himself, things I know I need to work on myself as well.

About the weather. I can just feel the wind and the cold. It's pretty cold here in Helsinki at the moment, so I can empathise with James.

Well, everything was super tastefully done. I would have maybe commented on the drunk thing in the last chapter, but I knew you would not let the characters get out of hand. Too many authors lean to alcohol as the thing to solve all problems.

AHh I came back and theres two new chapters, Does happy wiggle dance. I really Like Jamies. Is there a reason he doesn't like to be touch or is he just shy? Woot Turkish finally got his kiss!

^___________________^ Why, yes. Yes you are. But why must James be so thick-headed and proud?!?! T-T Can't he just give in and get to the hot man sex??? T-T

LOVE IT!!!

Man I wrote a looooooooooooong review with detailed footnotes and it was totally ontopic and then the net wiped it.Now I feel devasted.
Well to summarize love the chapter.
Love the human windshield, pin them up the wall and ravish scene, love the fact that all the glaring and mental projection James did to Turkish back paid off with the most cute line ever:I always feel like yxoure silently judging meROFL.
I hope James wont give up the goods to soon cause he's defensive and kinda ice queen like, also one of those that silently judge;)
They tend to stop when all the readers are cheering"JUst do it, man.Do you have to overthink everything?".
But he does, which makes him cool.Sorta.

Ha!

I really liked the chapter, and yes, you are forgiven :)

I love it! James finally admitted that he was actually jealous of Turkish. Lolz Oooh....the kiss

You know, while I was reading the story I was giggling like a madman... Now my mom (and my poor hamster) probably think I'm insane. I blame you! xD (Good thing I wasn't reading this at work... Would've earned me quite a few glances ^^)
Loved this chapter so much. I didn't really think there would be a kiss but good thing I was wrong. Now I'm going back to rereading this story a douzen times.
Thanks for the update and please update soon again :)

heh heh. You know, James reminds me of a way more uptight version of my best friend, who has a bad habit of overthinking things too. Somebody like Turkish would be good for her, so laid back and just going with the flow. Although truly, that's what she has me for, since I'm pretty much that way :P Thinking is for suckers, man! XD Anyhoo, I loved the way that Turkish handled him in this chappie, and the thing about him not wanting to throw up out of sheer nervousness like normal was very cute. Don't worry so much...or are you like James? :P