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by Jblueblue

schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You made me hungry! The food Turkish made sounds delicious!! I love how James has to be dressed by Kitty.
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Turkish so much! The food porn totally got me! I also like how James is allowing himself to let go and go after what he wants (despite not admitting what he wants and hiding it from everyone else lol). He's a very strong character - very complex - and I wonder how he'll react to any snags in his already fragile relationship with Turkish. Right now, I can envision him both flipping out at a problem and/or learning how to deal with it. It's not predictable and that's what makes this story so exciting.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Food porn is always fun to read. And this meal( I'm not sure do you cook stuff like this for yourself,or it came from net cookbook or you just threw the ingrediants in together to make it sound good for this chapter....but man this doesn't sound like dinner at all. It's an explosion and I don't have a clue how it would taste together and I'v enever heard for some of the spices you list.

And now I have to go eat.
Food always gets to me.
But, no, it wasn't as sexy as it should be.
Because you're innuendos during their conversation should have been more pronounced.
But that is only my opinion.
And I kinda want them pinning each other on a ceiling, down the ladder....
y'know;))
person Cherub
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Update update!! *jumps around* And food porn! Can my day get any better? xD
Anyway. Love the chapter. Now I want to really try iranian food. It sound delicious. (it sounds even more delicious with Turkish preparing it). But I better not try cooking it myselt. That could end in a very big catastrophe. And my mom really loves her kitchen. And the house... And our neighborhood.
Please update soon. I wanna read more about kissing... and stuff. ;)
Ciao.
person Aki
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol your story makes my heart smile. and im craving indian food now lol (going to go out and buy some) but is not the same as having a hot artist guy make it for you.
Btw i hope you find time to update swallowed by a whale is my favorite story of yours followed by this.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dude! I've been waiting all weekend for this update! Oh, hell, it's only Saturday. Well, I've been waiting for DAYS for the next chapter!

Oh wow, James makes TURKISH nervous?? That was unexpected; I thought Turkish was the one who made JAMES nervous. Of course w/James' anxiety, I'm sure many things make him nervous. I was glad to read that he was comforted just by listening to Turkish talk about his family.

Kitty's a hoot! If you want, I can label what to wear with what! Yes please, omg, hysterical!

It seems like the "old" Turkish may be gone and this new and improved Turkish is here for James! James should appreciate the new Turkish; he's less crass, less obnoxious now. I think the new and improved Turkish is really nice and kind. I like the fact that he told James that he usually gets what he wants and he's willing to wait b/c James is worth it. I thought that was so sweet.

So thank you for another great chapter. I for one, definitely appreciated smiling a little on this sad, sad day.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My god, am I weird to think it is so sexy when a dude try to impress a girl with a nice dinner he cook himself? Lolz I think a "date" like that is much more intimate and fun than one in a uptight, fancy restaurant.

Turkish is just getting more cuter everyday. He's so sweet to James ^^
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. For so time now none new story spiked my interesed so that I actually stuck to it but I'm going to stick to this one. XD And that one about Eli and Ajax. ;) I like that one too. ^-^
person AGN
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I feel like you are a secret stalker writing about me in some bizarro universe where things magically work out. Art instead of music, cities and names all swapped around, but otherwise creepy similar.

Since that universe is not this universe, I think more than anything I'm wondering when James will start acting differently from me so I can have some kind of judge of his character. As it stands everything I think of him so quickly conflates with my self-perception that I don't know what I'm saying. Speaking of which.

Love it, and hope for more soon.
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aaaah! more Turkish NAO! :):)