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by Jblueblue

person Cherub
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was gone a few days, I come back and BAM! Read an awesome, hot chapter. Makes up for the last internet-less days ^^
Hope you update soon. (sorry for the lame review, I#m dead tired xD)
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Go get him, Turkish, James is adorable. So flustered by the fact that he can't really hate the photographer anymore, and the fact that he's starting to be really attracted to him instead! :P I just want to pinch his little cheeks. Hey, Blue, I'll make you a deal. You write the next chapter of this, and I'll write the next chapter of Charlie's Angel. Do we have a deal? >>
person shoes
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter!!!! *does a happy dance*

this chapter was soooo hot!!!!!!!!! and it was just kisses!!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On the edge of my seat for more!!!!!

need more exclamaion marks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Talana
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"I said I think you're hot," he growls, "and as soon as you give me the okay, I'm going to take off all your clothes and fuck the shit out of you to prove it."

Gods, how hot is that? Amazing. I love this story. Can't wait for more.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you have a new fan. I just finished reading all the chapters and I like your characters. James is so honest with himself that he seems to hurt himself with the honesty. Turkish is sees right through him and truly seems to admire him.

I love the way you describe the little intimate touches Turkish gives to James, distracting him, shutting down his mind. I also love the way James is lost in his life and doesn't quite know where he's going. (It hits a little close to home for me, but it's cool). Both of your characters are very human and easy to like.

After reading all of that, I wonder if James will ever go home and give them the honesty that he loves to dish out.

Please update soon!
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving it. x3 Not much else for me to say right now.
person Anise
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(9) I somehow missed your last update but just to go back to ch8 (better late than never), I loved the whole phone conversation between James and Turkish :) I'm also not sure what to make of that Jenny, kind of messes with my whole get Kitty and Peter together idea ;)
Okay on to ch9 (the one i'm supposed to be reviewing) and can I just say that regardless of the fact that all they've done so far is kiss and a bit of touching they are still ridiculously hot :) It's also adorable how happy Turkish gets when his Distract James plan works as it was intended ^_^

I get the distinct feeling that you're a bit of an art nerd yourself which is not a bad thing it makes the story, everyone seems so passionate when they talk about the art. Write what you know I guess and I'm assuming that's the case here ^_^ Can't wait for the next update, I want to get into Turkish's studio.^^
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love Turkish. He's just the kindof guy James needs.. You can already tell when they finally do it its going to be hot
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
T-T Not close enough though! T-T God, agressive Turkish is hot Turkish. *nosebleed* The scene was just hot. *shudders* More?? *puppy dog eyes* Please?
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Art theory seduction, huh? I thought I was sitting in on a lecture at a world-renowned university (read: Yale, b/c it's the only world-renowned institution near me). Lucky I was awake enough to follow it! lol

Well, James can see right thru Turkish! He even realized Turkish was rambling on and on about art theory and whatnot, just to get James' mind off what he was doing with his hands and fingers. hahahah

Great chapter! James does think wayyy to much; he has got to stop and just "do it" already!