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(11) At least James knows that he's in trouble *snicker* and good lord the things that come out of Yusef's mouth *fansself* I hope for all our sakes James doesn't over think things and just says yes ;) I couldn't help but think that I would love to see Yusef meet James' dad/brother just to see the reaction when they find out he knows about cars. They probably have a stereotype of gays and knowing cars probably isn't one of them, it's a manly thing after all and it would never even occur to them. Unfortunately that may be a little outside the story since we haven't even got these guys together officially and I get the feeling Yusef is going to have to drag James into a relationship kicking and screaming ^_^

Anywho I certainly hope we don't have to wait too long, such an evil cliff-hanger but the next chapter should be good :) Love it so far :)

This is so unfuckingbelievably adorable! I love that you can make Turkish so fracking annoying and yet kind of hot-sexy-stupid-cute and smart all at once and it doesn't seem out of character. I'm also impressed with the little hot-head, who is so tied up in his little analytical box that he is scared to have anyone pull him out of it, much less molest him at the same time! Great story and I can't wait to read more!

omg this was the best present ever to come home too after like a week of being away.
Thank you for updating this and almost all ur stories. they make me sooooooooooo happy.

Ooohhh, I love that you have Ian and Arie in this chapter. Now we know they definitely got together! :)

I love how James is trying to fight his feelings for Turkish, and not doing a very good job of it! I know he was definitely gonna tell Turkish no for the sushi, but he changed his mind at the last minute. Like he wants Turkish and he doesn't want him. I'm glad he's warming up to him tho; I think the new and improved (thx to James) Turkish is pretty cool.

I have to tell you: I know you update this yesterday, but I knew I'd be out all day today, and wouldn't get a chance to read it. I printed out the chapter and took it with me on the train to the city. I went to see American Idiot for the second time! lol But I couldn't wait to read it, so I printed it.

Anyway, I wanted to tell you; that's how hooked I am on your hella awesome story! :)

Ch. 10 - I'm so confused right now. I could have swore that I reviewed chapter 8 or something a long, long time ago but then I looked and I hadn't so fuck it. Probably captcha problems. Captchas are bitches.

I'm pretty sure I said something (or I meant to say) that I really hated Turkish. Like a lot. More than you know. And then I kept on reading because I was like WELL, WE'LL SEE HOW THIS GOES. Which is odd because I am a wonderful quitter. I think it had somewhat to do with the fact that I felt that James and I are LIKE MINDS and so I continued. Somewhere along the line I was like: "Holy shit! Turkish is somewhat adorable. Like a puppy." Like a sad little goofy looking puppy that you adopt because you feel sorry for it but it eventually grows on you and then you fall in love with it. My feelings for Turkish are like that. In a nutshell.

I really have to commend you, though. How you made me like a character that I hated at first is amazing. I'm not sure how that happened. I'm not sure if it's ever happened before. I usually decide how I feel about something or someone instantly and it is written in stone, forever, and that's it.

Also, I know Turkish and James have something going on and whatever but, I was just wondering, is James' internal monologue single? Because I really want to court it and, hopefully, force it into a marriage it'll never be able to escape. Because I love it that much.

And I'm done.

P.S.
Stop creating relatable characters. One day I'll start thinking they're real. That could induce some very stalker-y tendencies. It would just be really bad. I suggest making Turkish a Gary Stu and a vampire. James should now be into self harm and is manorexic.

I've been so anxious for a new chapter of this story. I'm completely in love with your characters

I am in love with the awkwardness that is James' mind!! He's just so, I dunno. He reminds me of some of my guy friends, and that's probably why I love James! Plus, Turkish is just hilarious! Can't wait for the next update chika!

(10) Oh how I hope Jenny isn't here to stay, she's one of those people that likes to think they're nice but behind the fake smiles they really are just a snarky witch. I know there's the comparison to James but while James can be grumpy and miserable he's actually a good guy under it all. It's always fun to see just how the next date is going to play out between these two, although I can understand James' apprehension it isn't always easy to relax and just enjoy what's going on. Maybe Turkish just needs to kiss him senseless so that James doesn't have time to over think and talk himself out of things :) Great chapter, I'll have to go and check out the other story you mention.^^ By the way just a little side note about answering reviews if you ever want to respond to something I say, go right ahead and email me I don't mind ^_^

yay!!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!

poor James that Jess girl is a bitch, plus it's terrible to feel so uncertain about someone

I would leave a bigger response but now all I can think about is sushi and I'm hungry....

OMG that was so HOTT! I can't wait till Turkish and James get it on, it's gonna be so sexy and hot! Can't wait for the next chapter ~.^