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by Jblueblue

schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think... I wanna go hump something. Now. Holy shit.
person oo
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was wrong to end it like that.
but a very nice chapter yes.
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O_O O.M.G.!!! You tease!! What a place to stop! Dammit!! *runs for a cold shower, ahhhhh*
...I really "enjoy" this fic. I Love James and Turkish...Please update soon, :)
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's soooooooo evil!!! I'm practically drooling now. thanks.
person Minako
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"I know. Bad bad author." You can say that again... E.V.I.L.!! I'm kinda looking forward o people realising they are together. By now I guess everyone knows they supposedly dislike each other? Or at least, believes hell would freeze over before they got into a relationship?
Anyway, nice chapter, Turkish is really good at getting what he wants. ;)
person Southwind
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOVE your story, I just read it today, saw your name on Dextrous leftie's page! Wonderfully written, I like the characters. I'm looking forward to reading more.

In response to your questions after the end of the last chapter, I think James would look like a guy named Brad, he's Rachel's Zoe's assistant. Go to the Bravo website. He's slender, not to tall, gay, and stylish. Doesnt seem to shy though!

Thanks for sharing.
person Carrie
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. Now... I'll sell you my soul for another chapter within a couple of hours xD
person Manda
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man...there is nothing I love more than a slow buildup that pays off!!! I like Turkish more and more every chapter. Keep up the excellent work and I can't wait for the next chappy!!! :)
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D: How could you stop there?! And here I was, thinking I was bad when it came to cliffies...

>:p

Anyway, can't wait till you get the next chappie up!
person Cherub
schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. I really really hope you're gonna update soon or I' ll die (...kinda morbid to talk about dying while lying in the hostpital... oh well). This cliffhanger ist just plain evil. And you are plain evil. But you know that already. :D
(lol... captcha is giving me the word "james")