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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm one of those folks that like a good bone...boning in my stories! However, the way you did it was realistic. As much as James likes Yusef, he does have long-standing issues that won't just go away. I'll be okay with them building up to It, if that's your plan. :)
Glad you liked the picture. When you asked, he immediately came to mind. Did you see some of his other outfits, nerd-cute he is!
Glad you liked the picture. When you asked, he immediately came to mind. Did you see some of his other outfits, nerd-cute he is!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I had two chapters to catch up on! This made my whole morning! :)
And I think the Shelby Cobra is a pretty cool car; it's definitely hella awesome, just like this story!
I love the fact that James is realizing that he kinda likes Turkish; he's too cute. And he kind of contradicted himself: he admits that he kinda likes Turkish, but when Turkish innocently pats his knee, he starts to freak out, but then he's the one who leans up and starts kissing him.
I'm actually really proud of James for working thru his "freaking out" and working thru his anxieties. I just hope he doesn't freak out in the next chapter! lol Which, btw, I can't wait for! lol
And I think the Shelby Cobra is a pretty cool car; it's definitely hella awesome, just like this story!
I love the fact that James is realizing that he kinda likes Turkish; he's too cute. And he kind of contradicted himself: he admits that he kinda likes Turkish, but when Turkish innocently pats his knee, he starts to freak out, but then he's the one who leans up and starts kissing him.
I'm actually really proud of James for working thru his "freaking out" and working thru his anxieties. I just hope he doesn't freak out in the next chapter! lol Which, btw, I can't wait for! lol
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hah, omg, just read your response to my "review" in your blog! Hahah, you know I can't go anywhere w/o my James/Turkish fix!!!! :)
So yeah, I'll help you thru NY! hahah All I know is Grand Central Station and the streets from there (42nd St) that lead to Broadway! hahah But I'll try. :)
Oh, I never saw the Rachel Zoe show (I do know who she is tho) and the guy there in your blog, I'm sorry, I pictured James way cuter. But that's just me.
Anyway, can't wait for the continuation of their "getting to know one another", haha. Oh, also, I LOVED all the Oh my God's James was reciting in his head! So cute!
So yeah, I'll help you thru NY! hahah All I know is Grand Central Station and the streets from there (42nd St) that lead to Broadway! hahah But I'll try. :)
Oh, I never saw the Rachel Zoe show (I do know who she is tho) and the guy there in your blog, I'm sorry, I pictured James way cuter. But that's just me.
Anyway, can't wait for the continuation of their "getting to know one another", haha. Oh, also, I LOVED all the Oh my God's James was reciting in his head! So cute!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This part probably amused me more than anything else in the entire story for some reason: I detangle myself from Turkish, or Yusef, or whatever the fuck his name is. I'm really enjoying this one. I also like how you have 3 of your stories linked together. Although I was sorry Ajax thought Turkish was so dumb. Maybe he actually liked Ajax and was having the same speech issues he used to have with James. I guess I've finally fallen in love with Turkish now. I never actively disliked him but it took me a while to warm up to him. But in this chapter I really liked how he handled James. I like his laid back attitude combined with his steady determination in getting James to be his man. I know Turkish is much more patient than me about he and James not having sex yet and I hope James' issues don't make me wait too many chapters for it. Good work.
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again?! You wicked, wicked chika!!! Please update soon, I can't take anymore of your teasing!
About my James-like friends, the way I deal with them is either ignoring them or scarring them for life.
About my James-like friends, the way I deal with them is either ignoring them or scarring them for life.
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh xD!
James really is my comical relief for the day when I see this updated. Trukish is just so understanding and I love that!
I await the next update. :D
James really is my comical relief for the day when I see this updated. Trukish is just so understanding and I love that!
I await the next update. :D
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me such a happy camper!! XD You rock so hard for this chap!! At first I was thinking James might actually back out at the last second but was very happy he didn't. ;) So freaking excited for the next update!! ~Bijou
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sex-scene-fan-girl success!!!!! Great chapter!
I love James' unexpected innocence (not his virginity, but his shyness about it) - it just made it seem realistic and relatable. I seriously love this story to pieces.
I love James' unexpected innocence (not his virginity, but his shyness about it) - it just made it seem realistic and relatable. I seriously love this story to pieces.
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October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* You're seriously giving me hot flashes. Lolz I love the ending...so freaking hot/cute.
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October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was seriously hot, you've done a great job building the sexual tension with these two. Keep up the good work!