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loved it, more more more! wow the news about him being a virgin was pretty surprising for some reason. I thought it was very cute though. I wonder how he would act if he was jealous, for example if some ex boyfried/or guy was hitting on turkish. and even more, i wonder how Turkish would handle the situation!

(12) Not entirely surprised by James' freak-out was kind of expecting it actually, he just wouldn't have been James if he hadn't :) I also liked Yusef's laid back attitude about sex, I get the feeling he's one of those guys that figures as long as everyone is having fun (and getting something^^) who cares who's doing what. Probably a good attitude to have when you're dating a guy like James ;) Besides to be honest the foreplay between these two was ridiculously hot, who says intercourse has to be the end all, be all. That being said I do hope they get there eventually if for no other reason than for James to have had the experience at least once. Can't wait to see where they get to in the next chapter, I wouldn't even begin to guess I'll just wait for the update ^_^

I really do like your story but the word is clever not cleaver-a cleaver is a type of knife

Sooooo I've been following your story for a while now, and I think it's absolutely great! :) DON'T FEAR ME YEAH? :D Also, I do love how you portray each characters personality, whether it's by their language or body actions :D AND I REALLY like the name Yusef haha, when you said he was Persian I immediately thought of the movie Prince of Persia. I definitely imagined him more tan, tall, sinewy, and shoulder length dark locks -looking man :D (Rather contradictory from blueghost's post)! I love this story, keep working hard! [dedicated fan yeah? I even have this story BOOKMARKED hehe :)]

I'm seriously in love with you.. this story.. the characters.

In fact, we should all get married.

^,^

Please say yes.

On a side note, another great chapter. (: I really enjoy your style of writing. Its in first person, yet no details are left out.

hehehe i "like like" this chapter....wow yea that was lame but anyways i really enjoyed this!!!

That was yummy... He was all cute and innocent. -giggle- Can't wait for the next update.

we heart you too.well writen.

oh i love love loveeeee this.
hum i know this sound weird but I'm kinda curious will this be all the conflict in the story or are there two almost done?
or will it be like until the have sex?

I wouldn't mind ether way i will love whatever u do with them im just curious.

yay!!!!! sexiness!!!!

need more!!!! im a whore for your story!!!!