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by Jblueblue

schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I totally dig the smutty frotting! In fact, I totally dig ALL your stories, but I am loving this one the most :) x
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
James is being managed, hee hee hee. I love it! Sigh - as for your question, Blue...I love you, really I do, but have you ever had a story that you never had as much enthusiasm for as you should have, and then you just lost the rest of it altogether? I have several that are like that, and Art of Love sits firmly in that category. It is proving incredibly stubborn to budge, so I simply don't know what if anything would bring back my wish to work on it - and its worse because this chapter would be a sex scene, and if I'm not feeling the characters or the story writing those is hellish and they never come out as well. Apathetic would describe my state of mind toward that story, sadly. But if I do think of anything I'll let you know, I promise...
person Anise
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(14) Yet again I totally adore Kitty, of course she would hate the harpy right along with James, she's just that awesome ^_^
With everything that's going on and how James is trying to keep all these different parts of his life separate I can't help but get the feeling that it's all going to come to a head in one big collision in the near future. On the plus side if it does happen (and James doesn't have a nervous breakdown) it'll be good to get it all out in the open and get James moving firmly into the next stage of life. Great chapter, loved the beginning and of course the fact that James does realize that Yusef is playing him and also that he's letting him, can't wait to read more :)
person fudge
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story! Update soon, please!
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm really proud of James for not freaking out afterwards! And boy, can you write a smut scene! I think my computer just melted!

I hope James' inner psyche doesn't mess this up either! lol

Hella awesome chapter!
person Anise
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(13) Ridiculously hot, I love when someone writes really great foreplay, I think too often people are in such a rush to get to the sex scene they forget about all the other (extremely hot^^) stuff that the guys can be doing :)
So all it takes to get James to stop thinking or talking is to blow his mind, I'm sure that Yusef is more than willing to help out with that :) Great chapter, I liked how it ended on a rather sweet note, can't wait for the next update ^_^
person Aki
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh they are just soooooo cute

lol i love how james is letting his walls drop
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YUSSSSS! This is some serious chemistry!!!
person Anon
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet, dear :) You know, I always like to come across stories that get me all hot and bothered, because frankly my own work never does it for me.Probably too much in my head, like James in in his :p Anyhoo, I love James' realization that Turkish doesn't make him fret or worry or think too much, that he relaxes him. its funny and cute. Makes me want to at him on the head XD Also, I pat your head too, Ms. Author, for that nice chapter. :P -DL
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
-spazzes out- Yes! They finally did something naughty. And James didn't over think it! Woooo! Now I'm curious about the what's gonna happen in the morning.