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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One word:
Sexy.
XD
I'm terribly tired and I voice a few thoughts; Turkish is a evil man; I love it. James sounded so hot when you described him in the shower. Made me giggle like a 5 year-old. Thanks for updating; hope to see you again soon!
Sexy.
XD
I'm terribly tired and I voice a few thoughts; Turkish is a evil man; I love it. James sounded so hot when you described him in the shower. Made me giggle like a 5 year-old. Thanks for updating; hope to see you again soon!
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! My family was kinda like James' family, when it came to Christmas trees. Now, we have a fake one... makes me sad.
Hahahaha! James saw some of Turkish's work and liked it!
Hahahaha! James saw some of Turkish's work and liked it!
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So colour me happy when I checked the story (for the umpteenth time?) today and saw that you had updated! Yay! However, I've been noticing a few more grammatical errors and things like that floating around in this chappie. Some missing punctuation (eg. closing quotes in dialogue), etc. I'm very thankful that you updated no matter what, though, o' course. Goes without saying.
I'm also positively giddy that Turkish is so steadily moving the relationship deep into "boyfriend" territory...while James is sort of out of the loop, hesitant, but still slowly getting comfortable with the idea. OMG! It's enough to make one combust from pent-up happiness. Well, enough for a reader such as myself, anyway. Turkish is so unbearably cute with his perseverance!! It's true, he can be one stubborn ass when he wants something. Forgot which chappie that line came from, but it's most definitely true and I am loving it.
Keep writing! :)
I'm also positively giddy that Turkish is so steadily moving the relationship deep into "boyfriend" territory...while James is sort of out of the loop, hesitant, but still slowly getting comfortable with the idea. OMG! It's enough to make one combust from pent-up happiness. Well, enough for a reader such as myself, anyway. Turkish is so unbearably cute with his perseverance!! It's true, he can be one stubborn ass when he wants something. Forgot which chappie that line came from, but it's most definitely true and I am loving it.
Keep writing! :)
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter specially the part in the bathroom... that made my perverted mind happy
hey I just noticed something in your sentence
"Wait, is it like that art history guy that was always talking about Pollack and shit?"
umm its spelt Pollock, I don't normally notice stuff like it's that just stood out to me beause I recently had to write a 2000 word assignment on him at Uni
Yay I can't wait to see both of them in New York ;) If I ever go to America that is one of the places I would love to visit
hey I just noticed something in your sentence
"Wait, is it like that art history guy that was always talking about Pollack and shit?"
umm its spelt Pollock, I don't normally notice stuff like it's that just stood out to me beause I recently had to write a 2000 word assignment on him at Uni
Yay I can't wait to see both of them in New York ;) If I ever go to America that is one of the places I would love to visit
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow turkish is super annoying you could use some duct tape for his mouth but he is sorta sweet when it comes to james <3
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately....my Bio class is such a pain in the ass all of a sudden. -_-;
Anyway, I'm just falling in love with the couple days by days. Eeeek! Turkish is just too cute for words. Oh yeah...I definitely enjoy the smexy scenes by the way. XD Please keep them coming.
P.S: Drink lots of tea so you won't get sick! ^^
Anyway, I'm just falling in love with the couple days by days. Eeeek! Turkish is just too cute for words. Oh yeah...I definitely enjoy the smexy scenes by the way. XD Please keep them coming.
P.S: Drink lots of tea so you won't get sick! ^^
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hella awesome chapter! As usual! I think James should definitely go w/Turkish to NYC!
I think the whole tree shopping thing was pretty funny. I never realized there were so many rules to buying Christmas trees! lol
And when James was looking at the pictures in Turkish's storage room, I KNEW Turkish was the photograper! How could James not know?
Anyway, can't wait for the next update! :)
I think the whole tree shopping thing was pretty funny. I never realized there were so many rules to buying Christmas trees! lol
And when James was looking at the pictures in Turkish's storage room, I KNEW Turkish was the photograper! How could James not know?
Anyway, can't wait for the next update! :)
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October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(15) Finally got into that studio, good thing after all that waiting James likes his stuff (and not really surprised he didn't realize it was Yusef's) maybe Yusef will start trying something new with James' encouragement :) And I loved James' tree picking system, he really does have a particular way of doing most things, also liked how he wants to pull away from Yusef and get naked with him at the same time the boy definitely has issues^^ Great chapter, I love that you also managed to throw in hot James/Yusef even if it is just a paragraph plus you can never go wrong with naked wet men ;) Hope your weekend gets better, I completely understand the blah of wet and rainy, even our lights flickered a couple of minutes ago, I suppose it's the curse of living on the west coast ^_^
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October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapters!! just finish reading ur story
relly loved it, thanx
relly loved it, thanx
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait! The fever's going down on what? Eddie? I love that story also! Don't stop!!! Noooooo!!!!!! I love Eddie and Johnny......
Ok, but seriously, I think James is in looooovvveeeee!!!! Or at least in serious like, like, like, like. He just doesnt' realize it yet. :)
I'm glad that he's freaking out less and less with each passing moment w/Turkish.
Hella awesome chapter as always. Can't wait to see how Turkish is gonna celebrate James' "promotion"!
Oh, and btw: I think that you got so few reviews on the last chapter b/c everyone was too busy taking cold showers and buying new computers b/c of the steamy meltdown of their keys. :)
Ok, but seriously, I think James is in looooovvveeeee!!!! Or at least in serious like, like, like, like. He just doesnt' realize it yet. :)
I'm glad that he's freaking out less and less with each passing moment w/Turkish.
Hella awesome chapter as always. Can't wait to see how Turkish is gonna celebrate James' "promotion"!
Oh, and btw: I think that you got so few reviews on the last chapter b/c everyone was too busy taking cold showers and buying new computers b/c of the steamy meltdown of their keys. :)