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person Anon
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gawd I need a truck of tissues.I have a cold, and I'm down because my uni situation is rotten(waiting for my "plead bargain" to go through".
And now this chapter is totally doing me in*leaking all over form her nose and eyes*
But, James has become such a horndog sooner or later he'll be back for more;))
But man, If Turkish done that to me....oh man oh man I'd be switiching continents not stairways in/our building while I was "walking away".
C'mon it's embarassing..and in front of your boss..
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this is going in a good direction. I had been amazed at Turkish's patience thus far. I'm also amused because the argument just sort of highlighted their different natures. Turkish was so laid back about the whole situation. It's almost like I could see him saying something like I accidentally shot your parents. I'm always messing up. Let's be friends again. :-) So I'm interested to see where you go from here. I won't try to predict. I'll just wait and see.
person eatmorefish
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awwww James....i just wanna give him a hug/cuddle. anyways liking this bit of angsty-ness here...
person Faletta
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm so upset with James and Turkish. James needs to get off his high horse and learn to give in to his feelings. Turkish was wrong for taking the pictures of James in his sleep.
person Faust
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is the first time I can't pick a side in a long time. On one hand I understand James feeling the way he did about the pics (I could have neutered Turkish), but then I feel for Turkish. Hmmmm. And man, I hope you got my email :P
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I may kiss you!!! I'm super happy you updates so fast!!!! Mopey James wasn't that bad but I hope that he figures it all out soon!!!
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I'm constantly checking for the next chappie lol I want to see what happenes with them eee ^_^
person Anise
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(17) It must be nice to have people around you who seem so certain in how wonderful you are and are willing to tell you, no matter how much of an arse you're being. Maybe it's time for James to start acting like the guy everyone thinks he can be, I think Melissa hit the nail on the head, it's time to grow up and act like an adult. Although I gotta say his mum was pretty great this chapter too :)

Can't wait to see what James does next chapter :) as for now, YAY more wine! ^_^
person Carrie
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I crave this story like a druggy xD Don't think its healthy but gosh its a good story. :]
person Anon
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great... now I need to cry.