rate_review Reviews

I"m usually addicted to the 'fantasy' setting, but I can't really complain in this instance because you. write. so. well!

I love, absolutely love, the way you are developing these guys, and all the inner working of our dear, confused, and neurotic James. Can i relate? Yes. Yes I can. XD The passion was gradual, not random, there was not an overt personality switch on the part of Turkish, just a new found confidence when it came to the effect he so obviously had on his love interest.

I dig this story.
I really do. I really really do. And you know whut else? LOL. I live in SF, and that just tickles my cheeks that I understand and can relate to the setting. And U know whut else whut else??? HAHA, I'm a Photography major. Seriously, "right on the nose". Though.. the icing to my cake WOULD be being a cloistered gay boy in need of opening up. Lol. Quite.

Really.. ^_______^ Please add more soooooon.. Looking forward to it!!!!

Cheers!!!

wow turkish is kinda of an ass if he really likes james he could just chill out a bit
I mean it's like turkish broke up with him after turkish did something stupid.
Poor james. I can't wait for another update

And I am officially in love and eagerly awaiting more :)

But...they....and he....*sniffles*....how could....*sigh*....*glares*....You better write quickly is all that I have to say on the matter!!!

Ouch. James really doesn't know how to play it cool, huh? p.s. You have cute chapter titles!

I knew by the title that this was not going to be a happy chapter. I actually really, really like this chapter because it brings the characters and readers back to reality. That reality being, things are not all sunshine and rainbows between the two boys. I loved the symbolism with the umbrella...and I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck!

aawwww james! and yusef!!! i heart them

oh poor silly james. the picture thing is way creepy though. i hope Mel is not a bitch about it
anxiously waiting for the next chapter

Your biggest fan

waahhhhh! No, Turkish, come back?! Poor James....he needs to be love. T_T

*take the tissue* Buuuhuuuhuuu, pweaase, the next chapter !!