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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I"m usually addicted to the 'fantasy' setting, but I can't really complain in this instance because you. write. so. well!
I love, absolutely love, the way you are developing these guys, and all the inner working of our dear, confused, and neurotic James. Can i relate? Yes. Yes I can. XD The passion was gradual, not random, there was not an overt personality switch on the part of Turkish, just a new found confidence when it came to the effect he so obviously had on his love interest.
I dig this story.
I really do. I really really do. And you know whut else? LOL. I live in SF, and that just tickles my cheeks that I understand and can relate to the setting. And U know whut else whut else??? HAHA, I'm a Photography major. Seriously, "right on the nose". Though.. the icing to my cake WOULD be being a cloistered gay boy in need of opening up. Lol. Quite.
Really.. ^_______^ Please add more soooooon.. Looking forward to it!!!!
Cheers!!!
I love, absolutely love, the way you are developing these guys, and all the inner working of our dear, confused, and neurotic James. Can i relate? Yes. Yes I can. XD The passion was gradual, not random, there was not an overt personality switch on the part of Turkish, just a new found confidence when it came to the effect he so obviously had on his love interest.
I dig this story.
I really do. I really really do. And you know whut else? LOL. I live in SF, and that just tickles my cheeks that I understand and can relate to the setting. And U know whut else whut else??? HAHA, I'm a Photography major. Seriously, "right on the nose". Though.. the icing to my cake WOULD be being a cloistered gay boy in need of opening up. Lol. Quite.
Really.. ^_______^ Please add more soooooon.. Looking forward to it!!!!
Cheers!!!
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow turkish is kinda of an ass if he really likes james he could just chill out a bit
I mean it's like turkish broke up with him after turkish did something stupid.
Poor james. I can't wait for another update
I mean it's like turkish broke up with him after turkish did something stupid.
Poor james. I can't wait for another update
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And I am officially in love and eagerly awaiting more :)
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
But...they....and he....*sniffles*....how could....*sigh*....*glares*....You better write quickly is all that I have to say on the matter!!!
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. James really doesn't know how to play it cool, huh? p.s. You have cute chapter titles!
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I knew by the title that this was not going to be a happy chapter. I actually really, really like this chapter because it brings the characters and readers back to reality. That reality being, things are not all sunshine and rainbows between the two boys. I loved the symbolism with the umbrella...and I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Good luck!
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aawwww james! and yusef!!! i heart them
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh poor silly james. the picture thing is way creepy though. i hope Mel is not a bitch about it
anxiously waiting for the next chapter
Your biggest fan
anxiously waiting for the next chapter
Your biggest fan
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
waahhhhh! No, Turkish, come back?! Poor James....he needs to be love. T_T
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*take the tissue* Buuuhuuuhuuu, pweaase, the next chapter !!