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Love this so much! I still love James, even with his arsehole moments! :D

That was hella hot! You have Turkish's diction down. Normally I would find the way he speaks totally annoying, but you make wayy cute. You've got mad skills!

What, no kiss-and-make-up smuttiness? I am disappointed; Turkish can certainly do better than a little kiss...but I'm also glad that he understands and can see how hard that is for James. You totally left us ANOTHER cliff-hanger there though! Kitty is going to freak and gush about James and Turkish and it's going to be AWESOME. Not sure what'd Peter say, but I'm sure he'll be understanding as he's like the "perfect" best-friend. Although in the last chappie, the way he was comforting James seemed way more touchy-feely and intimate than any straight guy would ever act, even for a best friend.

I'm totally excited for what will come next now that they are officially an item--I'm sure it will awesome to read. Oh, and right now, everytime I imagine Turkish in my mind, I see Ash Koosha from Hospital--my hot Bolivian prof has been pushed out.

Oh, and I'm also looking forward to your Juicy Fruit update! Thanks for writing. :D

loving this story, yea it was short! but that's ok, because you put the chapters out in good time!

(18) I'm so proud of James, not only did he makeup with Yusef but he confessed to Kitty and everything, he really is trying :) By the way speaking of Kitty I actually wouldn't be surprised if that was her reaction to you telling her you had a body to get rid of, of course bodies don't faze her but telling her you're dating Turkish well I can't wait for that reaction :) I also found it rather adorable that after everything was said Yusef still apologized to James for not checking up on him, he really is just too good to be true ^_^ Great chapter, I'm glad it didn't take James ten chapters to figure out that this is something he wants and is worth going after, can't wait for the next update and everyone's reactions ^_^

Ooh, the shiny! I like I like! Good job :)

YAY!!!! I'm so happy i love perfect make ups...have you read A Suitable Lover on fictionpress, its a really cute story about an artist/libraian who is way worse with relationships than the main charater but it is really funny at the same time

-headtodesk- You're going to kill me with the cute. The updating is spoiling us rotten [not that I mind! =D]. Something tells me Kitty's reaction is going to be different than expected. Again, definitely looking forward to the next chapter and good luck!

aww im glad all is well in James land again. thanx for the update and i shall harras you about swallowed by a whale. Please don't let that story die. Its the story that made me fall in love with you and i will be so heartbroken to see in not finish

Yay, James made the first move, I really think he needed to. Yes Yusef messed up, but he was always there and happy to be with James, that gives him a a free pass or two. The star for their tree was a nice touch. ;)

It's almost crazy how much I come to this site looking for an update, like your going to post every two hours! I WOULDN'T MIND IF YOU DID.:) Thanks for the quick update. Next stop NYC!