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by Jblueblue

schedule March 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. I was about to read this but the chapters were put down? Hope you update this soon. :)
person Rosei
schedule June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fun first chapter!!!!!

Turkish?! HA! What a name!!!!!

Love the snarky James!!!!!

Looking forward to chapter two!!!!!
person ILoveWyatt
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much!
person shiyo
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is one of my favorites. I know people who speak like Turkish and it made his personality so real to me. James is quite the bitch but also hysterically funny and neurotic and did I say how much I love this story?
I loved how the story ended with them saying that they love each other. Just perfect!
person Isamina
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woo! That was GREAT. like, hella awesome. ;D I loved how you had me hating turkish as the douche he was, and then turn me around to rooting for yusef and wanting to shake james until his brain got right. Sly work.
person madqueend
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i have loved this story from the first chapter. i fact, i love it so much that i have read the entirty of it at once. you have amazing talent! you made them seem SO REAL! i loved it.
person Anise
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
(24) When it comes to a story I really like, an epilogue is always a good thing :) I also liked that change in pov, not surprisingly getting to see into Yusef's mind shows an alarming amount of thought dedicated to sex but whether he'll admit it or not I don't think that James minds ;) It was a nice way to show us how far Yusef and James have gotten and also see where James stands with his family. Honestly I can't help but think that by the end of this visit James' parents (especially dad) will be if not won over, at least on better terms simply by force of will on Yudef's part.^^

Nice to see an update from you, it feels like it's been too long since I've read something of yours :) Hope you have a good weekend, night hun ^_^

person Southwind
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant seem to get to the thread to leave a comment, so I hope you'll see it here. To put in my two cents, I'd like to see Yusef and James a few years down the road, maybe in their later 20's. I'm wondering about how James' new career as a curator is going.How has being with eachother changed them. Did Yusef ever publish his photos done in a different style, where the two have been. Have they met eachother's entire families.


I know that's alot for a one-shot, but if you have to break it up into a couple-four parts, I'll try my best to deal with that!
person xMalaiax
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't read your stories gdi. I have to work on my own. WHy must you tempt me with your awesomeness? Why? I'm trying to write here and all I can see is YOU UPDATE AND STUFF AND NOW I JUST WANT TO READ.

I may need some kind of intervention....
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! I thought you added more! I got my hopes up!

But I still re-read the last chapter! What a hella awesome ending to a hella awesome story! Way to go Blue! :)