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Haha, nice beginning! I'm curious about this stranger too, though she does sound like a feisty little devil. ^^ I like the setting. When the I read the narration in my head, I can hear a southern accent and everything. XD So bravo for that! Wonder what she wants with that Indian? And if she'll come back to the saloon. I'm guessing she will. ;) Or Millie will go through the bags, won't she? Actually, I think she'll do it as soon as she gets back into the bar! XD Great start, hun!

i'm glad candy pushed you to post it. it's good. i want to read much much more.

Wait's 'patiently' for another update........

Wow...I'm going to be honest and say that I only opened this originally because I was bored, but I was surprised to find out that I actually got really into it. Your writing is very easy to read and just seems natural to me, and I'm already liking the characters even after only reading the first chapter. Also, it doesn't hurt that this takes place in the 'Ol West', which always makes for an intertaining read. So I'll definitely be checking in on this one.