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for The Stranger

by Jesterjp

schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nuuu, i feel all warm and fuzzy inside...

two stories i like updated... i can go to sleep happy now XD

i really don't like the deputy though... i think he should be shot... multiple times... in the crotch... people like him shouldn't be allowed to reproduce... *frowns*

*thinks about Lynn and smiles* at least she could probably beat that bastard in a shoot off...

waiting for more ;)
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, she is awfully curious, isn't she? Can't blame her for it, though. That stranger of hers sounds great in a nightgown. ;) I hope she returns next chapter. And that scar? Hm, more mystery. ^^ I'm glad you've gotten more boosts of inspiration! Keep going with the updates!
person Juliet
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very unique story. I haven't read anything quite like it. I hope you continue with their story - these gals would make for one hot couple.
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Millie's got it bad already. ^__^ I'm glad that Lynn had some more personality in this one, smiling and eyes twinkling with laughter. And Lynn is a nice name, too, but I like that she's not giving out some things so I can continue to be curious about her. I can't wait until she comes in next time, too. ;)
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nyaaa >.< questions answered!!!! i can be happy for a while....

*ponders for a moment* I wonder if sir deputy will go too far on Lynn's watch...? hmmm....

waiting semi patiently for the next chapter... but i understand the working thing though, so i can make my patience hold out...
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...One is left to wonder if her fear of things going too far with the Sheriff is a foreshadow? But to find out I must read more. And to read more, you must update!! =]
person Celery22
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now this is interesting, I love how out of the ordinary it is. Great setting, love that you're willing to write in a time we would consider controversial. I can't wait for more. ^^
person ikkichi
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohohoho~

I LOVE reading stories set in the 1700-1800s. Especially Western-ly (-esque? -based?) stories! I swear, I was grinning like an idiot while I read this, no joke. I fucking loved it. I just, just, loved it! I can't say anything else other than that. 'w';

I... I really wanna read mooooorrrreeeee. *whines pathetically*
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo, how i love your writing style. i feel the same way sometimes when i meet someone new and they want to be all mysterious like with me. hardly get any sleep at all.

keep up the good writing, now i'm dying to know who this mystery is. XD
person ikkichi
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I tell you what, this was a nice way to come down after (finally) doing the first assignment of my online class. Very nice way. And reading that this town was/is located to a lake, I couldn't help but nod with understanding 'cause I live not too far from the Mighty Mississippi myself. :'| But, boy. I think if I had someone else's belongings that were like Mysterious Woman's, I wouldn't be able to stop thinking about them for a while. I prolly wouldn't be able to stop (somehow) seeing them every few minutes, either: think I see something moving and turn my head, nope it's the bags; look into a mirror, guess what, they're there, too; go to get something from downstairs, oh look, it's the bags. Or something like that, knowing my luck. It also amused me how Mysterious Woman is like, 'Oh-ho. I'm in your thoughts, not lettin' you get to sleep,' and Millie's like, 'ARGHK. Get out of my head! I don't even really know you! Why is this happening!?' XD