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Awww... They're so adorable~

I really love it all, you're a great writer and I can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. ^^b

damn woman...just, just... damn...

Only kissin' for now. xP That was cute. It's interesting that they both have Natives in their pasts, but how they view them is totally different. I don't know if I'd be able to do that if I were Millie, even if Lynn was a sexy babe that I wanted in my life. Death's hard to get over, especially when it involves murdering and parents. Hm, we'll see. Also, I have a feeling Mr. Deputy will make an appearance soon! That makes my skin tingle excitedly for some drama in the saloon. :) Update when you can, hun!

Awesome Jester. You're pretty good at this girl! You romantics and taking your time! Always taking your time!

"At least that there Lynn woman is actin' like a right proper gentleman. Takin' it slow an bein' respectable like. Heck! I ain't seen nothing wrong with it. They ain't hurtin' no one." The short blond gunslinger in black stated over the hustle in the bar. "As far as I figure, they're both alright by me. You can tell that deputy he can corn hole himself. I ain't shootin' a one who don't deserve it!" After a hearty swig that drenched his attire, he smiled with contentment. Civil Cid Cole obviously didn't care what people thought of him. "May I get another ale over he'ah?"
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I hate having an active imagination at times. This story sends my head all the way to the old west and i think up stuff like that above the line.

>;-}

guess you can keep that around in a scrap pile of ideas, suggestions and random thoughts.

Right, right. I said I'd review this, didn't I? And that I'd also ramble long and hard in it. So, here goes.

But, I don't quite like that ex-husband of Lynn's. He also kinda reminds me of the Deputy-whose-name-I-can-never-remember-because-he-is-not-important-enough-to-me. (I really want ice cream now, but for later, and I'm kinda hatin' on and ragin' at this 'linksys' of mine, as well as MSN.) I kinda also want to see what Lynn's tattoo looks like. Can I google it or something? Huh, huh? Uh, let’s see… what else can I say before I continue rambling…? Oh, right. Go Lynn. Maybe I have mixed priorities or something, but that payback was well-deserved. Maybe not the servants, methinks, but whatever works. Can’t leave witnesses, I guess.

So, Accepted is really distracting. But it’s a lot more happy-inducing that the internet connection I have access to. >_> Also, that chicken alfredo I had for dinner was really good. But it was even better when Fish and I added some Monterey Jack cheese to it. It was all cheesy and chickeny and… and, noodley. It was so delicious, I had a bowl-and-a-half, instead of only a bowl. Oh, yeah! Fish also accepted that proposal I offered her, about her cooking and I cleaning the dishes. She was like, ‘That’s totally all right with me.’ She also laughed when I told her that someone else was asking about the wedding and that news of it’s getting around. It was great.

But, so, earlier when I was gabbing at my mom, she said that my cat’s seeming to be getting used to my not being there, which is a good thing, because he’ll be leaving soon. Kinda sad to see him go, though. :/ But, it’s cool. I’ve been thinking of trying to give both of them back for a couple months now, ‘cause I’d also been thinking of moving. I do believe I’ve mentioned that my landlord scares me… somewhere. And I’m currently chillin’ in my dining-/living-room, totally flea-free and loving it. (That’s one of the things I hate about [half-]outside cats: fleas.)

Hm. Now I wanna watch another movie, but I don’t know what to watch and my collection’s kinda limited. Hm. Actually, I feel like watching The Lion King. I’ll suggest that right now. So we’re totally watching TLK now. 8D Haven’t seen this movie in forever, I tell you. Which is a shame, because I love it so. I remember having a VHS copy of it, but then it got stolen while I was in kindergarten, I do believe. I think it was the same year that someone mugged my mom and stole the Xmas presents from her car. I also used to have the soundtrack to this movie, which I ganked from my sister. But then my pokemon CD case vanished one day, causing me to lose one of my favorite games of all time: Crash Team Racing, for the PS1. Fucking love that game. I’d play as Pura the tiger because she had awesome handling, even if she was tied for the slowest (if not the slowest) car. I think I almost beat the game before I lost it, too. D:

So, this review’s almost a page long in Word, yanno. Is it long enough, or should I keep going? I guess it doesn’t matter, really, since I’m going to keep rambling on anyway. I hope you’re having fun on the internet (I’m currently connected, and waiting for MSN to repair the problem it seems to have so I can log on and bug you s’more). Knowing my luck, though, I won’t be able to sign back in for a while. *sadfaces* Hm. Hmmm… how’s my internet persona doing? Is it still connected to the internet? (I wonder how that cottage is doing…)

Well, this is now a full page’s worth in Word. And I think I’ll stop here. Maybe make the next one a little longer if this happens again. Wait. Can I ge—YES!

Wow, my attention is hooked, looking forward to the next update to see what else develops.

Wow. That's so tragic. I'm so speechless right now, I don't even know what to say. I guess I'm like Millie, heh. But damn. Sorry this review is lame, but it was a very good chapter and I love that her story is out in the open now. I wonder how it will continue.

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you have me speechless... in Lynn's defense, i would have done the same thing...

now my curiosity as to what's next has been ripped open and i need to know...
i'm waiting for the next installment...

All those cliff hangers. you are quickly becoming my favorite villain. >;-}

So, the bad stuff. Horse thieving. Bank robbing. Train robbing.
She don't seem the type. so I'm gonna guess. gun fighter or killed a peace officer.