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Update? :)

Oh Come on it's been like forever since you've updated this. I need to know what happens next in this historically accurate world. Because people are eventually going to find out, they always find out in these things. Please Update

Aaaw C'mon!
I'm like a starving cat, sitting on the counter, pawing at the can of tuna, while looking at the can opener!

Ok. You need to update now. I would like to know what happens next! Soon would be awesome.

I loved the chapter there is just something I'm drawn too when characters are a bit naive at certain things, and the time period when this is taking place is what adds to that allure the most i guess.

My rofling is that funny, huh? Well, now I have more space to do it! 8D

But, oh? Oh? OH? Story time? From Millie? *bounces excitedly* 'Could I ever love a person that killed their own family?' Say yes, damn it. 'Could we settle our difference when it comes to indians?' YES. 'Could I hide my love for her?' FUCK NO. *laughs quietly* Oh, Millie. *sniffs a little* D'aaawwww... Millie, you's gunna try to think differently 'bout dem injuns. And all for Lynn. 'v' Was... was Millie just clitblocked by Lynn at the end? *stares at it and squints a little* (Have I mentioned how awesome the ability to resize this review box is? No? Well, I'm saying it now: it's fucking awesome.)

Short review is short when compared to my other, longer, rambling ones.

Pffft. Millie's just like, 'Damn it, Lynn. Stop clitblocking me. >:c' So... I'm totally glad that I never got 'The Talk', because that just sounds disgusting. Seriously. (It also kind of reminds me of Alien...) LAWL. Lynn was caught doing something naaauuughtyyy~ ...Kind of. Gaawwwd. This is great. It's like giving a little kid the sex talk. Or reading someone do it, anyway. I *knew* when Lynn started laughing that Millie's expression was the cause of it. And my mental image of it is quite funny. And now I can't stop laughing. Millie's narration doesn't help much so far, either. *snickers* I bet the priests and god-fearing-men would have a field day with Millie right now: 'taking the Lord's name in vain', masturbation, lesbianism. Millie's prolly a witch, too. xD Lawl. Oh, Lynn. What have you done? You've... you've created (gawd, I can't believe I'm actually going to listen to my brain and say this) a free bitch.

Wow, she gets an orgasm her first time... >_> ANYYYYWAY, good for her! xP This chapter was so salty (ahem, Jennifer's Body) and nice to read. I love how inexperienced and unaware Millie is to all of this sex stuff. It's funny. ^^ I'm guessing Lynn will have to teach her a thing or two-- Er, maybe not anymore. ;) Again, happy birthday, and thanks for the chappie! :D

sweet. short but a nice little rest from the bigger part of the plot.

Lynn... God, she makes me hot...

awesome chapter.