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ahh i knew it..poor Cassandra...
hey it's good to see and read everyday's update..LOL love it..
keep it up!

I'm surprised Dave would hit her in a place that was obvious for the world too see (unfortunately, I know a lot about how abusers work). Then again, he told Cassandra not to go downstairs. I'm kind of taking what your writing and see it from Dave's and Cassandra's point of view as well. Trying to think, what's going on when Taylor isn't there. But I like where this is going.

I'm just wondering how in the hell little old Taylor is going to help Cassandra, if she can even help her at all. She's got nowhere to run, to hide, and no skills to keep Dave from hurting Cassandra. But, I guess I'll just ahve to wait, won't I? *scerunchy unhappy face* I dun wanna wait.

:)

Gosh....I'm almost afraid to know what set Dave off.

hmmm i already having idea that dave is not a good husband to cassandra..how sad..but anyway i'll find out more as the story continues..LOL so update soon..

Uh-oh. Cassandra is in a big ol mess of trouble. She's gonna get her ass whuped, just you wait and see (you should know, you write the damn story). Want more. Sorry if this review is drunk sounding, it's 3:30 am and my body decided it would be an awesome time to wake up!

this seems to be building into a form of mystery... it's keeping me in suspense for the good things i know are gonna 'come' ;)... keep it up, you have me waiting for more...

Oh.My.God CC, I love it!!! Update soon, hun, I wanna read what happens next!!

Wow tension and blushing moment..sooo cute..LOL more more more

So, I shit you not, when I first read "local lumber factory", my brain told me it said, "local tumblr factory". >3>; And I hadn't even been onto said site until moments before I read the first chapter. But anyway. I love the repetition and emphasis used in the first few lines; really drives the point across, as I'm sure it was intended to do. And the end gave me a chuckle, because I could just picture the man grinning on the other line while saying, 'I've got some bad news.'

And now (finally) onto the next chapter. 8D

Ohoho~

Hm. I wonder why Cassandra wants Taylor to call her by her full, given name, and not Dave's nickname of 'Cassie'? Does she not like the shortened version? Is she trying to get, say, closer to Taylor? (*teehee* Maybe it's all three or something.) But I can't imagine one person doing all that in one day, at least, not on the first day. Maybe the other rooms will be easier and take up less time, I wonder? Oh! Maybe Taylor'll have to spend the night 'cause she didn't finish her job! >8D (You make my mind whir with possibilities and thoughts, yanno.)

And, I don't recall mentioning in the review I wrote about ten-fifteen minutes ago, but I'm really likin' this so far. 8D