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Your premonition was correct my dear... i fucking hate Dave. fuck him and his fucking mask. fuck his facade of righteousness. fuck him senseless with ten inch wide dildo to the ass!!!!

now that that's out of my system...

SQUUEEEEEEEE!!!!! that ending had me with butterflies in my chest and stomach!!! SQUUEEEEEE!!! XD i love it!!!

Oh I love you ;u; Your updates are so amazing and fast. I've read all the stories you wrote and I fell in love with you more ;u;...

Anyway, I'm so glad my connection is behaving (for today). Means I get to review your story ;v;. Words can't describe how I feel whenever I read a new update. This story is just amazing like that, to make me feel all sorts of feelings, good kind of feelings. Looking forward to the next update!

EEp!! Finally THE kiss has happened update! update! update! I must know what happens next! sorry a little too much sugar :P

This was beautiful. Very realistic and wonderful.

Thank you fro this chapter.

the panic, the longing, the intrigue!!!! how we humans long... there is that void that we need filled, but we are afraid of expressing in the event that it depresses... ah to be in love...

your words enthrall me as usual. good luck in school, i see great things happening in your future ^^

Raise your hand if you been there done that! *raises both hands*

Loved the chapter, as usual miss Candy. Need moar! I love the way you write. It sounds like a stream of consciousness, almost effortless. Lovely.

I'm typing his from my phone so that's why you can't clicky my name.

I loved the second half of this chapter. You can tell that Taylor is a horrible liar and dav knows something happened in that office. I'd almost feel bad that an underage girl is stealing away his young wife if he wasn't so set on breeding her and beating her. I await your next chapter of genius with astonishing patient, darling.

I dont like Dave. Nope not one damn bit. BTW I love the imagery in your work your an amazing writer.

So, I had to laugh at the part where Taylor notes that she's feeling itchy, because on a game I play, that was actually my name: "itchy". And it reminded me of one time when a friend from the game found my FF.net profile, and sent me a message opening with, 'Are you itchy?' Just thinking about that time gives me a laugh. (Eek. Sorry for letting this sit so long. m(._.)m) But, I think Dave might be jealous of Taylor for getting to interact with his wife like she does. Don't know why I think that, but, I do apparently. He could also just be really possessive of 'Sandra, or a combination. I'm prolly just spoutin' nonsense off, which is most likely what's happening. :'|

Hm. I can't think of anything else to say. D: I blame all that laughing and picture-making earlier for draining what smidgen of creativity and review-making I had.

I don't know what to say. This was a very sad chapter. All I can think of is how Cassandra is going to get out of this. Will she fake a miscarriage? or will she just run? she does sound attached to Dave, however, so i don't think that'll be it. waiting for more.