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for Cassandra

by CandyCaner

person jackpot7374
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man that scared the crsap out of me. damn dreams! I was thinking Taylor better not just stand there and watch! LOL I was fooled, I must admit. Nice one!
person Jesterjp
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter. Really good job, darlin!
person ikkichi
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...I kinda hate to say this, but you got me with that dream. I was like, "Oh, no! Poor Taylor!" and then I was cringing in shock and horror, almost started tearing up (I might have, actually), toward the end. Was this my punishment for not drawing a good enough lion? D: The ending made me 'd'aww' a little bit, though. And I was happy again. x'D

But will 'Sandra leave Dave and go with Taylor? Will she stay with Dave? Find out in the following chapter(s), right? I can't wait. 'v'
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit that beginning had me going. i was about to jump into my laptop, into the imaginary world there and beat Dave to a pulp for laying a hand on Cassandra.

i think my heart literally swelled when i read the rest though... i love it.
person Shuura
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I had a serious nosebleed after reading this chapter.

Anyway, great chapter as usual. It's so full of love and... sexiness. Will be looking forward to the next update! XD
person jackpot7374
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You were right I did like that! But I do like most of what you write. That was sweet and sensual. Nice job Candy! Oh crap don't fall asleep! Shit!
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hot and juicy! god! why do you torment me so? (good torment though) but them falling asleep there only spells trouble in my mind

keep up the good work and don't stress yourself out. ^^
person Shuura
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More confessions and the most important one, they kissed again. A passionate kiss this time. And I'm all excited and giddy.
I wonder what's going to happen in the master bedroom... :D.

Love the new update. Look forward to next one!
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been on vacation! And holy shit look what I came back to =D Yay! Next chapter please!! I love it!! Never going on vacation again while this story is in progress haha
person Jesterjp
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaand..... BAM! Dave walks in halfway through the fourth orgasm and ruins everything!

DUN DUN DUN! Sorry, I'm being stupid.

Me likey this chapter very much. I don't like how Cassandra responded to her though. She deliberately hurt her with her words. That's not a good thing.

Can't wait!