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thanks for the update!

I must say I liked reading about Alec being a "teacher," and much like a Drill Sergeant...I do like Seff, he sounds so adorable...

Poor Brice...seeing Alec walk around wet and naked...there is only so much the man can take...

Yeah, I think you could time shift by a few weeks, if you wanted too...the story could allow it, because it seems flexible...I hope that makes sense.

Yes! An Update! *dances happily* Why didn't you like this chapter? I did. Yeah, I suppose that some would see it as boring but you showed a more....tough? side of Alec. maybe a better word would be forceful? or in charge? We also got to meet Seff and Olcan. I really like them Seff seems like he'll be a little brother type to Alec and Olcan seems like one of those tough old people that doesn't take any crap, lol. I like the idea of a time skip because as much as I'd like more chapters (hint hint) I like the idea of more ACTION better...well more like it getting here lol. I know that it takes time to set up the plot...and develop characters....and all that jazz but I'm an impatient person and I want to get right to the point lol. That's not to say that this story has been boring so far! This is actually one of my favorites and I'm always happy when I see an update. Anyhow, with the time skip, could you not due like some and say "one month later" and then immediately jump into the story? I don't know how you plan to do it but maybe you could do like a 'summary' paragraph? Give a description of how the training is going and smoothly (or roughly) the courtship is going and then say something like he was so busy or happy or something that before he knew it weeks had flown by....? I don't know this is your story but I thought I'd make the suggestion.
So, when is Sajni going to make his reappearance? So that he can seek 'revenge' even though Alec hasn't really done anything....? What's been going on with the humans? Have they been attacking lately? Will they attack soon? What's their plan? Will other refugees be coming into the pack? Oh! Oh! Is Alec going to get pregnant before the battles start? Then again he'd have to have sex to do that..... So when's the sex going to happen? Or do you not write sex scenes? It'd be fine either way. Damn now my imaginations in overdrive and I want to know what's going to happen!!! *takes deep calming breaths*
Alright, moving on. I love the new characters and I love the way that Brice is acting it's totally adorable! I thought that I'd point out that you called Seff Seth when ever he was leaving the after last meal training. I'm officially addicted to this so please update soon! =D

Wow, thanks for the update!! The writing style is a little different because you didn't have any switching view points. It flowed a lot better but was still really good and I'm really happy that you put something in about his old pack, it seemed like he was getting over that a little too quickly. Although, I guess you can look at it like he hasn't had a 'relaxing' moment to think about it between running for his life and becoming apart of a new pack...Oh! Are we going to get to see the pups again? And where's Brice's mother? She was mentioned at the begginning of the story but we haven't seen or heard from her since...
Anyhoo, very cute and I can't wait for more!!

That was fantastic!!!! I really liked the bit over his Brother although it was kind of sad!!! I hope he can talk with Brice over what happend so that he can start to heal!!! They are such a cute couple!!! And I totally love Nadia!!! I really hope to see you soon!!!

I am really enjoying your story and look forward to reading more. I like Nadia and maybe, he has his own story?

Awe that was sooo sweet!!!! I really like the dream of Alec as well as the comforting after!!!! And I really have to say I love the mother!!! Espacially the last senteces were great!!!! She is a thought one but she is probably very nice when you get to know her!!!! To your question I think I like both the roleplaying and your own work the same so either is fine with me as long as you continue this wonderrful story!!!! See you again soon!!!

thanks for the double update!

It was good to read a little bit about Alec's past and his family...So Evan was a healer too...and he sacrificed himself to save his brother...I'm glad that Alec was able to name the pups...

Looks like Brice had to take Alec to meet his mom...I love his mom...so devious...and didn't give anything away, even if she does approve of Alec...

Hmmm...I'm sure Sajni is up to something...

I actually teared up when he was naming the pups and was naming the little boy after his brother, something about it was just so sad to me! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love it when my questions get answered! =D I love this chapter and I actually like this way of writing better, but the other way was good as well! I'm so happy that I got to read TWO chapters! =D Update soon please!

Love the story. I think they should practice those mating moves for the big event. I would love to see some making out. If they are sleeping together do they still have to keep their hands to themselves. Plus I started this chapter wondering about the pups and there they were. Great timing.