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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really great!!! I so love it whenalec calls Brice my alpha!!!! It's so sweet!!!! Add the advice fom Brices mother was really unexpected!!! I thank you so much for this chappie!!!! See you again soon!!!!
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update!
I'm glad that Alec decided to be happy and have courage and accept Brice has his mate.
I do like Nadia, so wise...and Kauleer's interactions with Brice, even surprised Brice...
I liked the scene, well the dream scene, with Alec and Evan, it was a nice touch between the brothers, and Alec's confusion over the decision he had to make.
I'm glad that Alec decided to be happy and have courage and accept Brice has his mate.
I do like Nadia, so wise...and Kauleer's interactions with Brice, even surprised Brice...
I liked the scene, well the dream scene, with Alec and Evan, it was a nice touch between the brothers, and Alec's confusion over the decision he had to make.
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story!!!! please update soon!!
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story for the first time today and read all 10 chapter of it in one go. :) I liked it quite a lot and it has the potential to grow into a really good story. For one I liked how you didn't rush into things and explained the attraction although that wasn't even necessary. And you've given a possibility for the main characters to actually develop feeling for each other logically and with time. I really like this story and can't wait to read more. ^___^ Good job!
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read all 10 chapters just today. Very interesting! And a good pace :) I really like the tension of dominance between the two alphas but i'm really interested to see how they grow closer emotionally and not just physically. Keep up the good work!
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You could probably stand to skip just a bit. I mean, it gets boring repeating each day, and none of us really want to read that. Just make sure you skip reasonable amounts of time.
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, I would have reviewed all the chapters but it was so good I couldn't wait to read what happened next. So far the story is spot on and I love how you got Alec interacting with the pac and the way him and the Alpha didn't just jump into bed like most stories. Though I have to wonder, will this be a MPreg by chance? Not that I care but I wonder if you plan to have him prego during the 'war' when the humans arrive, a bit of drama added to the fic, lol. Just wondering.
Mirky
Mirky
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter, very constructive to the story I thought. I think your being over critical of your work.
In terms of skipping till the mating, yes please :)
In terms of skipping till the mating, yes please :)
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chappie!!! I really liked Alecs way of training!!! I really don't mind if you skip the time till the mating!! Just write the way you are most comforable with!!! I can't wait for the next time!!! See you again!!!
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September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very much appreciated, and so would a speeding up time, too many people waste time on the months leading up to the actual action (we all read this website for the hot man sex :-)) So sorry i haven't reviewed early, had to sneak onto the hotel computer to read it and didn't want to risk getting caught.
SO PLEASE MATING!!!1
HUGGINS
Aduial
SO PLEASE MATING!!!1
HUGGINS
Aduial