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for My Alpha

by ThatRedHead

person Mirky
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this entire fic of yours is plain awesome. I am quite addicted to it :) Sajni was a nice surprise, I can't wait to see just when he appears and the MPregdoesn't make me squeemish though I wonder when you'll introduce it and just how protective the alpha will be. Oooh, can we have a jealous moment? I would love to see the Alpha be assertive, demanding, and just "You're mine!"
>:}
Mirky
person kylee123
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story is going great. I wonder why Sji is still hnging about the pack grounds. I hope he is not spying with the plan to betray the pack. Loved the mating scene.
person JJ
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...

Brice and Alex are so cute together...

I must say I love Kauleer, his attitude and how we wants to pick on Brice; he is one of my favorite characters!

Oh...Sajni...I wonder if he is up to something.
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY!!!!!!! I can't even describe how much I'm addicted to it. the second I saw an update I was like SCREW EVERYTHING! I gotta read this chapter! If that doesn't tell you wha tI'm going to say next then let me tell you: Update soon!!!! I need to read more!
HGS
person Seren
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great first lemon! I really enjoyed it A LOT! That was very well done indeed to have Alec shows his real strength during the mating and while on drugs. For a minute I thought you might even have Alec "mate" Brice and not the other way. That would have been quite a drama I guess! But the way you made it was really perfect: coherent with the characters and their personalities.

Great work! Don't hesitate to write more of them :P

Hugs!

Seren
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo!! Update!! I absolutely adore his story. You have the pack dynamic down perfectly and the relationship between Brice and Alec is fantastic. You don't have anything to worry about the smut scene it was totally smexy and HOTT!! I really cany wait for the next update so keep up the great work!
person JJ
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...

I thought the smex was wonderful...and the whole power play between the two before Alex submitted was wonderful...I'm glad that the Moon approves of Brice and Alec's mating.
person Aduial
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, that was awesome, very nice. No long pulling out just getting it to the point. So we'll be having a lovey scene soon. Looking forward to that.

Huggins

Aduial
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You took your time updating, but I say it was worth it!!! =D I LOVE this chapter!!!! And I was uber happy that Alec accepted, I was afraid there for a minute that he was going to extend it or refuse!! Update soon!! Really soon!!! Please, please, please!!
person Seren
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and the characters! I am so happy they decided to mate:) I can't wait for the next chapter to be on and see what will happen for them!

Great work!

Seren