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for My Alpha

by ThatRedHead

schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry your other reviews decided not to review but I really loved this last chapter and can't wait until the next. SO please update soon oh yeah I also love the new love interest between the beta and the new foreign alpha. ^_^
person smint45
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so fantastic!!!! I so can't wait for the next part!!!! And I want to see the pups!!!! Will they be also white like alec???? Awe I can't wait I so totally like MPreg!!!!! I really hope that they will be ok with the humans!!!! I have a bad feeling because they all think they can beat them easily!!! I hope they are not undersetimating their enemy!!!! I hope you update soon!!!! Thanks for the many updates!!!! See you!!!
person Loves to Laugh
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay I love this update and look forward to more. As for Marik and Kaauler (not sure of the spelling) I like the chemistry you have already created between the two. Nadia is going to love see his brother in this situation.
Continiue the great work, A fan, L2L
person Tessa Russell
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!Can't wait for the MPREG! Such a good story! Keep it up! :}
person Nini
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my :$ Just had a total squee moment when I realised you meant me ^^" Totally made my day (I am now grinning like a total loon).
An interesting turn of events! I can't help wondering if the lovesick pups are going to face some relationship trials soon... and if the situation with the humans will get worse before it gets better? (You know, just to crush their hopes >__>) But alas and alack, I will just have to sit and stew and wait for the rest of the story XD
person smint45
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly great!!! I think this alliance is a great idea!!!! I hope the Mpreg will not cause problems with the fighting of the humans!!!! Still I can't wait!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
person BlueDragon
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
incrediable. This is amazing! I can't stop reading the chapters over and over again. I can't wait to read more.
person nini
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, looking forward to the rest of the story! One inconsistency though... sort of... I think you left Caleb out of the pack formation when they were heading to the other pack. I may have read it wrong and completely missed it, but a heads up just in case.
person smint45
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I totally loved the lemon!!!It was so sweet and HOT!!! And I totally love it when Alec loses control!!!! I hope that will happen more often in the future!!!! They are such a cute couple!!!! And I hope that they will change the top in the future!!! I love it when they switch!!!! I can't wait for 13 but I've got lectures now so I have to wait till later to read the rest!!! I just wanted to tell you before I read chappie 13!!! Thanks for now and see you later for the review for chappie 13!!!
person smint45
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was also wonderful!!! i totally love kauleer!!!! He's so nice!!!! But he is the brother of Nadia so that explains it!!!! Thank you so much for the second chappie!!!! See you again soon!!!