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by ThatRedHead

schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Kauleer and Mirak would be an adorable couple, especially since Kauleer totally wants to kick Mirak's ass at the moment. Their relationship would be an amazing thing to watch. I can't wait to see more. And like Alec, I am definitely hoping for Brice to say yes.
person JJ
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the updates!

Looks like Alec is in heat....and seems to wants pups, I hope Brice does too...

I look forward to a Mirak X Kauleer segment, that would be so awesome...I love who Mirak teases Kauleer...he gets frustrated so easily.
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not dead yet. In fact I went through the effort of registering so I could review properly. I'm really enjoying this story, so don't give up!

Would really like Brice and Alec to have pups!
person DukeCain
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh.. lovin' MxK... they would be super cute
person Jetfire
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No sorry, didn't die, just wasn't in the country. I work as a flight attendent so not always there to read your updates but was very happy to see 2!!!!! when I got back today. Just had to read it, now I'm going to sleep because I am knackered. Can't wait for babies! Please please have babies sooon. yay.

Huggins
Aduial
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh i wrote my review but just when i posted it the server went into maintenance T______T

i shall have to rewrite everything well hello =)
love your story haha i do hope Brice says yes~
and would certainly love to see a story going on with Mirak and Kauleer,
it would be interesting seeing Kauleer's reaction to Miraks tauntings x)
and oo something planned for Nadia~~ cant wait xD
person Nini
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Mirak and Kauleer would be an awesome couple! With Mirak's childish flirtatious ways and general annoyance of Kauleer, and Kauleer's Kauleer-ness 8D Something planned for Nadia is totally fantastic because you've made him into such a sweetie. If I was a sexy, muscly wolf-man (living in the wonderful world of fiction) I would so tap that. And by 'tap' I mean 'mate' >__> Haha, I would die of happiness (and the hilarity) if you made Kauleer the hulking, protective brother when whoever it is starts chatting up Nadia. DIE SO HARD.
I'm not usually keen on mpreg (nowhere near despising, though), but I'm really curious as to what the pups will be like, other than freakishly cute and adorable and bouncy and all fluffy... (squee!) Not sure why, but I keep assuming there will be two. But I shall wait and see. Read. (Reading online involves seeing...)
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! <3
person Seren
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I read your last 2 chapters! I can't believe I missed one update! I have been checking nearly every day and the only time I don't I get the GREAT surprise of two chapters!

Your fic is one of my fav, so please don't stop writing! Plus your cliffhanger is incredible for this one!!!

I love the idea of Mirak X Kauleer side story!

Very nicely done, sweety!

Please keep writing!

Seren
person emily
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of new pups being born... I'm really glad you updated and I'm looking forward to finding out if Brice is going to agree with Alec or not.
person dioeraclaire
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i,m not dead! i
have enjoyed reading this story so far- keep going! :)