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for My Alpha

by ThatRedHead

person Seren
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great love scene! Your wolves are adorable, and I am really enjoying your story! I can't wait to read how Alec lives his pregnancy and what Brice feels as well:)

Thank you for sharing

Seren
person kagecat
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i <3 this story :o
I wish you to write more please :D

I shall await further chapters :3
person Nika Tanaru
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written,:) the characters are beautifully developed and the plot is very engaging and I can't wait for the next installment! keep up the good work!
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Delightful chapter. Interesting that you chose for the male pregancy process to be painful at the beginning but it totally fitted the story and universe you created.

I'm surprised Kauleer didn't beat the crap out of Mirak. Either they're going to become friends/lovers or Mirak is going to have the snot beat out of him. Nice secondary story plot.

Thanks for the holiday gift of a new chapter - Happy Thanksgiving!
person JJ
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...

Mirak loves to piss off Kauleer...he definintly likes to poke the sleeping bear with a stick as the quote goes.

And Alec is pregnant...how wonderful...
person Tessa Russell
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapters always make me giddy. hehe I love the new pairing! And can't wait to see is the Alpha want to have pups! Update soon PLEASE!
person ap5
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. More, more, more, please.
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just found this story, it's really good, really interesting and fun to read
i'm usually into more violent, angsty stories but i'm enjoying this one.
person saraphena
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o didn't die nut my laptop did anyway i think pups would be ever so cute but we are on then break of war and alec wouldn't bt able to contibute his skills asnd knowledge if he was knocked up so mabey when the win the wasr all live happily ever after they could have litter of oh... i don't no a dozen
thanks for the update
S
person ceedee
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kauleer is going to be surprised.I hope you have someone that can redeem Sanjay-